Comment from marijmd

Excellent

HE has something to tell HER? I wonder what that could be? Does he have an even bigger secret than being a demon or scratch that s pregnant demon? LOL

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

LOL! THat's funny! I love it. Great review, Maria. :)

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Please Theo don't have a wife who doesn't 't understand you(scarasm) at home , or maybe it 's Luke in disguise. Theo is a character who grows on you. Good chapter especially on expanding Theo's character

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks so much, Muffins. :)

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

This is a great scene with strong dialogue. I loved her act - especially cutting her
toenails with a knife.
I don't think she will be able to resist Theo for long.
Nancy

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015

Thanks, Nancy. She's too afraid of all the problems coming between them, and isn't even sure what love is.

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

A very nice chapter with clear, honest conversation. You write dialog very well.

This posting moves the story along and sets up strong expectation with the next.

Good yob!

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoy the dialogue. My stories tend to be nearly all dialogue. I'd like to learn to write scripts, but I'm too lazy. LOL! :)

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

Hi Phyllis
That was an interesting chapter. Blaze's plan to look and act like a slob backfired. Theo still wants her. Poor man.....but is she softening up!! Good ending...leave the reader wondering what Theo wants to tell Blaze...

Annette

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015

Thanks for reading, Annette. :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Oh, a cliff hanger! Shame on you for setting us up like that. All you did was guarantee we will run to the next chapter. Smooth move.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015

Thanks again. And you did, didn't you? Hehe. :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Blaze's little act was hilarious! I wasn't sure if she'd butchered that phrase on purpose or not, but I almost fell off my chair laughing. What a complicated life for a demon!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015

Thanks, Cindy. Yes, she said it on purpose, trying to act like a dumb hillbilly. :)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hi Phyllis,

Trimming her toenails with a penknife? So that's what differentiates a real human female from a demon, lol. Great touch with his offering to buy her a nail clipper. That image is hauntingly beautiful. I can see the demon behind her green eyes.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015

Thanks a bunch, Lou. I know someone, from hicksville, who does trim his toenails with a penknife. Refuses to use clippers... says the knife does a better job. :)

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Loved this chapter. Of course she changed into something totally appealing without realizing it. Soooo funny her playing undesirable. Ha! Your writing is fast paced, so length is never a problem other than too short. I wasn't even aware that this was longer than the norm. God! What's he going to tell her? He's married but hasn't seen his wife who refuses to divorce him in years? He won the women's giant slalom at Sapporo? mikey

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015

LOL! You WOULD have to guess it. You must have seen the skiing event on TV, cheater! :)

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Another fantastic chapter, Phyllis. I am glad I am only one chapter behind. I have been doing my best to keep up. I am really enjoying your most entertaining novel. I really like Blaze, especially.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015

Thank you SO MUCH for saying that, Vergie. I hope you like chapters 65 and especially 66. That last one isn't posted yet, but will be in 24 hours. It actually brought tears to MY eyes. That's never happened! :)