The secret to a Happy Marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "What's good for the goose..."How is it done?
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Comment from judiverse
The guys are finally heard from. They still don't know the wives are onto them. So far, having a massage doesn't seem to be on the same level as what the guys are up to. You're doing a great job of interweaving the doings of the men and then of the wives. Martha is quite a character. I love when she tells the masseurs to "Hit it, boys." judi
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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The guys are finally heard from. They still don't know the wives are onto them. So far, having a massage doesn't seem to be on the same level as what the guys are up to. You're doing a great job of interweaving the doings of the men and then of the wives. Martha is quite a character. I love when she tells the masseurs to "Hit it, boys." judi
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Judi. I'm getting ready for the next one.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from EMB
First of all, that Martha's a trip! What a great character. She really carried the scene, easily. As for the scene itself, very engaging. And I loved the way you ended it, leaving just enough for the imagination. Great job. This is the best thing I've read all day.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
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First of all, that Martha's a trip! What a great character. She really carried the scene, easily. As for the scene itself, very engaging. And I loved the way you ended it, leaving just enough for the imagination. Great job. This is the best thing I've read all day.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
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Thank you and Welcome back, the site was lesser without you. I have to see what your latest post is.
Comment from Dawn Munro
I can't help but wonder where this is leading in terms of the secrets to a happy marriage, but I'll reserve any further comment - I see no problems with this scene, and again, it's expertly written. (The plot, however, has me questioning if such places actually exist - six bikini-clad hookers all pre-arranged, for example...? These men I can believe, since they are supposedly doing another job...)
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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I can't help but wonder where this is leading in terms of the secrets to a happy marriage, but I'll reserve any further comment - I see no problems with this scene, and again, it's expertly written. (The plot, however, has me questioning if such places actually exist - six bikini-clad hookers all pre-arranged, for example...? These men I can believe, since they are supposedly doing another job...)
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you. You missed a few scenes. Chapter four will answer your questions.
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Thanks - yes, I know - I've saved them on my bookshelf and plan to read the whole thing again at some point. It's truly good!
Comment from pbroussard209
Now I want a one, I really need one, my stress has been so bad I'm a walking knotted rope. I'm looking forward to finding out who Martha really is and what her plans are for the wives.
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Now I want a one, I really need one, my stress has been so bad I'm a walking knotted rope. I'm looking forward to finding out who Martha really is and what her plans are for the wives.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Great scene. I had a very good masseur come to my house every Friday for a year. I was naked, but he kept a sheet over me and pulled it up only to do certain areas. He only charged me half his going rate since I lived close by and it was every week instead of monthly like others. I got to know a lot about him since we talked while he worked. Sure wish I could have a massage again. If done right, you feel better for days.
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Great scene. I had a very good masseur come to my house every Friday for a year. I was naked, but he kept a sheet over me and pulled it up only to do certain areas. He only charged me half his going rate since I lived close by and it was every week instead of monthly like others. I got to know a lot about him since we talked while he worked. Sure wish I could have a massage again. If done right, you feel better for days.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Lance,
I love it. The lead up and closing are as sensual then laying it out graphically. The gals are in for a few surprises---especially if Martha has anything to do about it.
Next thing they know, Martha will have Chippendale's knocking at their 'doors!'
Nicely written.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
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Hi, Lance,
I love it. The lead up and closing are as sensual then laying it out graphically. The gals are in for a few surprises---especially if Martha has anything to do about it.
Next thing they know, Martha will have Chippendale's knocking at their 'doors!'
Nicely written.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
Comment from Jay Squires
A great scene, Lance. You create a nice moral balance between the scene with the women and the masseurs and the men with their massagers.
No SPAG!
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A great scene, Lance. You create a nice moral balance between the scene with the women and the masseurs and the men with their massagers.
No SPAG!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
Comment from meggie13
It is well written and very thorough. I have not known how a massage is done tanks to your write now I know. The ladies a very open to it but Martha seems more forward than the other two. It was fun to read.
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It is well written and very thorough. I have not known how a massage is done tanks to your write now I know. The ladies a very open to it but Martha seems more forward than the other two. It was fun to read.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
