Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter Trece; Part Uno"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
44 total reviews
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I,ve fallen behind with my review as a result of bronchitis, but I am trying to catch up with ongoing books. This chapter is most entertaining as Soni and Jim banter about who move closer to the fireplace overnight. Sounds like the start of setting romantic boundaries Nobody I know would choose the body warmth of a wet dog over a warm human. In this case decorum requires hands off.
In this short post your reader begins to understand the that of the desert wilderness where refugees often die from starvation and death as Jim and Soniagee about at least one thing.
Love and Irish Hugs the plot moves foreward.
Roger
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2015
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Hi Barbara:)
I,ve fallen behind with my review as a result of bronchitis, but I am trying to catch up with ongoing books. This chapter is most entertaining as Soni and Jim banter about who move closer to the fireplace overnight. Sounds like the start of setting romantic boundaries Nobody I know would choose the body warmth of a wet dog over a warm human. In this case decorum requires hands off.
In this short post your reader begins to understand the that of the desert wilderness where refugees often die from starvation and death as Jim and Soniagee about at least one thing.
Love and Irish Hugs the plot moves foreward.
Roger
Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2015
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I hope you're feeling better. Thank you for taking the time to catch up.
Comment from Tellis
Dang you always give just a little to get the appetite whetted and then I have to wait for the next post to see the action. I know this is a romance but it has the makings of an action adventure also. Keep up the good work.
Tellis
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Dang you always give just a little to get the appetite whetted and then I have to wait for the next post to see the action. I know this is a romance but it has the makings of an action adventure also. Keep up the good work.
Tellis
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Deniz22
I don't usually review books, but this one looks interesting. And, wise Fanstorian that you are, you are keeping the chapters short and the story moving along...
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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I don't usually review books, but this one looks interesting. And, wise Fanstorian that you are, you are keeping the chapters short and the story moving along...
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jclark
I am one of those who jumped in the middle on this one but I love it already. You have a way of creating characters that are not too complex but yet have enough depth to help the reader align themselves with the good but understand the bad. I also enjoy the romance that you (eventually) create while you give us a great story line. I will be following this one to the end. Good luck! Kindly, Judy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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I am one of those who jumped in the middle on this one but I love it already. You have a way of creating characters that are not too complex but yet have enough depth to help the reader align themselves with the good but understand the bad. I also enjoy the romance that you (eventually) create while you give us a great story line. I will be following this one to the end. Good luck! Kindly, Judy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the dropping by and the encouraging review.
Comment from arnie47
A nice easy read. In such a short supply of words you put in a lot of detail, information, and a little history of the story and this couple. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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A nice easy read. In such a short supply of words you put in a lot of detail, information, and a little history of the story and this couple. Nice job.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from irishauthorme
Liked the sleeping arrangements, and the confused waking up. Soni is more attracted than she will admit to herself, very typical of a strong-willed woman who is used to making it on her own.
Everything they have to go through together will bring them closer until one of them declares their affection.
Good chapter.
irish
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Liked the sleeping arrangements, and the confused waking up. Soni is more attracted than she will admit to herself, very typical of a strong-willed woman who is used to making it on her own.
Everything they have to go through together will bring them closer until one of them declares their affection.
Good chapter.
irish
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Yes, everything will come together. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Bryana
I haven't read all chapters but I enjoyed this one very much.
I feel sorry for the immigrants that come across the dessert to find a better life. I get angry at their government for not doing more for their people.
This made me smile..."Midnight doesn't like taking orders, specially from a dog". I also learned to love Goliath and Butkus.
Excellent writing my friend.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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I haven't read all chapters but I enjoyed this one very much.
I feel sorry for the immigrants that come across the dessert to find a better life. I get angry at their government for not doing more for their people.
This made me smile..."Midnight doesn't like taking orders, specially from a dog". I also learned to love Goliath and Butkus.
Excellent writing my friend.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from leigholiver
good piece of writing, had me interested from start to finish, which in its self is a unique trait to have. well done. good use of words
keep up the good work
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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good piece of writing, had me interested from start to finish, which in its self is a unique trait to have. well done. good use of words
keep up the good work
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curly Girly
Soni accuses Jim of snuggling up, and he blames her. Later, they are riding along when they hear a noise. Jim draws his gun, in preparation for danger. Will they be seen? I'll have to read more to find out. A well written chapter, Barabara.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Soni accuses Jim of snuggling up, and he blames her. Later, they are riding along when they hear a noise. Jim draws his gun, in preparation for danger. Will they be seen? I'll have to read more to find out. A well written chapter, Barabara.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - animals do have personalities that is for sure. I can really feel the plight of these refuges, their struggles and hardships you pen well.
Overall a solid read and great addition to your story.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Dear Barbara - animals do have personalities that is for sure. I can really feel the plight of these refuges, their struggles and hardships you pen well.
Overall a solid read and great addition to your story.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
