Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I like the picture as it looks like a big hand ready to seize the boat and throw it on the rocks. I don't know what its got to do with motor bike accidents though. I presume that's what the poem is about. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015

absolutely nothing I'm afraid....this is about Spanish Galleons and the man who lead them to a new paradise in the sun to build his palace and govern over lesser than....with a dash of cool and side of beans...-wink- bug the big love-

Comment from hajile12

Exceptional

This is nothing short of a masterpiece in my eyes. I love the subtle references and the feel of this poem. I love how the first stanza is repeated as the last stanza. Thank you so much for sharing this.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015

well Hallelujah....thank you Sir...from myself and Senior Cortez. it is apparent your taste buds have grown to level 2....I salute you. Bug the big love....Michael

Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

Opening and closing verse, that is so powerful, the words and the way you structured this. I have to admit, sometimes I do not think I totally understand where you are going with your mass of words and historic references. But I love the way you say it. Does that sound crazy?

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015

Its the story of ones mans prideful ambition, told from my point of view...and facts found in Hernan's fingerprints. Ahh hell I just been diagnosed a bi-polar racist so...better not ask me about crazy...I certainly don't need to catch anything else at this point...plates full I'm afraid....lol thanks Shelia love-

reply by granny goes viral on 19-Feb-2015

Holy crap. Who or what dx'd you? I am dying to know.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015

I don't know what dx'd means...but I just said this is story of Hernan Cortez free based on facts....you got a light...?...lol

reply by granny goes viral on 20-Feb-2015

diagnosed. dx'd, medical shorthand. Sorry.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015

O well....its a long story...um...well nobody else seems to like poem ...okay....ahh well friend of mine , lets call him John....first...and then I believe he convinced my black mother....and well from there, another friend , lets call him fed up...he said that we all ...you me and every breathing human...have this disease...-headshake-...I'm sorry if I'm the first one to have brought you this news, but I'm afraid its true....I mean it must be John saw it...I do too...yes maam, I've got real problems it seems, I took multi-vitamin and started drinking orange juice yesterday...-shouldershrug-...its up in the air....love bug-

reply by granny goes viral on 20-Feb-2015

Have a cup of tea. Go to sleep. All will be reveled in the morning. Or else it will snow.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015

yes maam...you're right...goodnight...-smile-