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Finding Daisy

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Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy

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Comment from Jackreese
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There is a lot going on in this chapter. You wove a decent tale that gets the imagination going while keeping the reader guessing.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
    Thank you. Glad you liked it
Comment from Adri7enne
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Oz has a girlfriend, Oz has a girlfriend! LOL! I had a bit of a time straightening out who was saying what to whom at the start, but I got it sorted. So now we get to meet a whole new set of characters. Sounds like fun, snod. Can't wait to meet Oz's girl.
Well done. I still like your characters. Don't be so long between posts.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
    Trains too crowded to write this week (plus I'm on the raz tonight) I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the review. I'm not sure she's his girlfriend or just an accomodating woman entranced by his unique charms. We'll see.