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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "An Unexpected Surprise."The story about three women who need to make money
21 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
This time George took Jenny to a bowling alley on and, after a laughter (Lose the 'on' after bowling alley)
Okay, wasn't expecting Winky Fred to pop out!
This was a great bit of comedy that would translate well to the screen, if this were ever made into a movie. :-)
I missed something somewhere. When did George ask Jenny for a date?
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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This time George took Jenny to a bowling alley on and, after a laughter (Lose the 'on' after bowling alley)
Okay, wasn't expecting Winky Fred to pop out!
This was a great bit of comedy that would translate well to the screen, if this were ever made into a movie. :-)
I missed something somewhere. When did George ask Jenny for a date?
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Well spotted, Sue. I am so glad I waited till you'd reviewed before committing myself to the book on Amazon. I hope you feel better soon, girl. I need you! Alexis xxx
Comment from MelReyn
Oh no! How awkward! Jenny has got a decision to make now. Will she push George out the door, tell some more outrageous lies, or start telling the truth? I'm also looking forward to seeing what his reaction will be.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
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Oh no! How awkward! Jenny has got a decision to make now. Will she push George out the door, tell some more outrageous lies, or start telling the truth? I'm also looking forward to seeing what his reaction will be.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
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It's now posted, so I hope you enjoy the outcome! Thank you so much for your review. Alexis x
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Alexis - this one just rocks my friend - I had the best time reading it and laughing along the way. Really amazing job at keeping the flow going but also having me so engulfed in the read.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
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Dear Alexis - this one just rocks my friend - I had the best time reading it and laughing along the way. Really amazing job at keeping the flow going but also having me so engulfed in the read.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
xx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
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Wow! I can't keep up with you! I'm so glad you saw the humour in this. I think a lot of reviewers pass by because they think it will be smut throughout. Hopefully more funny than smutty though! Thank you for the wonderful six, you made my day. Alexis x
Comment from bookgirl1976
This was a funny story. I enjoyed it and it kept my attention throughout. I was able to get lost in the story like I do when I read books. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
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This was a funny story. I enjoyed it and it kept my attention throughout. I was able to get lost in the story like I do when I read books. Great job.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
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What a wonderful compliment. Thank you! Alexis x
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahaha! OOPS! How great was this chapter. It was very entertaining like they all have been, but this I must say has been my favorite one so far, I just screamed out with laughter first the call and then Fred Hahahaha! Great work mate. No SPAG that I could see but it's bloody hard to see with my eyes leaking so much from laughing. You are a star mate and damn it I don't have any sixes. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
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Hahahahaha! OOPS! How great was this chapter. It was very entertaining like they all have been, but this I must say has been my favorite one so far, I just screamed out with laughter first the call and then Fred Hahahaha! Great work mate. No SPAG that I could see but it's bloody hard to see with my eyes leaking so much from laughing. You are a star mate and damn it I don't have any sixes. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
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The sixes don't matter, your laughter does! Thank you my friend, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Alexis x
Comment from scongrove
Oh my gosh! HA-HA! This had me on the edge of my seat! I just knew George would find Fred! You wrote this chapter just brilliantly. I was looking forward in reading the chapter about Jenny's date and you totally wrote it perfect. I knew she would end up getting a call from a client. I was just waiting for her to pull the telephone cord out while holding my breath at the same time. LOL! Looking forward to another chapter.
Great job! :)
Shana
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
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Oh my gosh! HA-HA! This had me on the edge of my seat! I just knew George would find Fred! You wrote this chapter just brilliantly. I was looking forward in reading the chapter about Jenny's date and you totally wrote it perfect. I knew she would end up getting a call from a client. I was just waiting for her to pull the telephone cord out while holding my breath at the same time. LOL! Looking forward to another chapter.
Great job! :)
Shana
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2015
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I honestly didn't know what I was going to write when I sat down to write this part chapter in the morning. I think my muse was having one of her good days! Thank you so much for your wonderful review and rating. Alexis x
Comment from madhatter1977
I honestly don't know what toys could cause so much havoc, lol! A great chapter, Alexis, I can see this as a Love Actually/Bridget Jones type movie if that's what you're going for and I love your sense of humor here. Isn't it crap we have to use US spelling on FS? Otherwise we get told off by the spelling teacher. Very funny storytelling! Keep up the good work, Pete :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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I honestly don't know what toys could cause so much havoc, lol! A great chapter, Alexis, I can see this as a Love Actually/Bridget Jones type movie if that's what you're going for and I love your sense of humor here. Isn't it crap we have to use US spelling on FS? Otherwise we get told off by the spelling teacher. Very funny storytelling! Keep up the good work, Pete :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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These are a selection of 'toys' the girls have accumulated to help them with their calls on the chat line. They normally put them away at the end of the day, like a parent often does after the children go to bed. 'Fred' was just there as a joke and had never been used for the purpose he was intended! Alexis x
Comment from rwilliam
BWAHAHHAHAHAHA I loved the ending! Excellent! I love that he 'winks' at her, or so she thinks. LOL! :-D
George teasingly wiping the tomato sauce from Jenny's chin with his paper napkin.-- teasingly 'wiped' the..
Great chapter. Good job!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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BWAHAHHAHAHAHA I loved the ending! Excellent! I love that he 'winks' at her, or so she thinks. LOL! :-D
George teasingly wiping the tomato sauce from Jenny's chin with his paper napkin.-- teasingly 'wiped' the..
Great chapter. Good job!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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I'm still not quite sure about the chin wiping bit, so will probably work on that later. Hope you enjoy today's offering! Alexis x
Comment from Spitfire
This would be hilarious as a movie or play. I love the deft way you get the girls in and out of awkward moments. I bet the caller was turned on by the male voice and threat. LOL
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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This would be hilarious as a movie or play. I love the deft way you get the girls in and out of awkward moments. I bet the caller was turned on by the male voice and threat. LOL
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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That's what I'm writing the book for. The minute I mentioned the plot to a couple of pals last September, they said exactly the same. Fingers crossed! Alexis x
Comment from Cat of Letters
Oh hell! He sat on Fred!
Hi Alexis,
Rather preoccupied with the gathering snow scene at the moment. So I have not combed this chapter for errors. Will do so at a later date if you want to email it to me.
This is a hoot . . . Oh no!
Cheers Alison
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Oh hell! He sat on Fred!
Hi Alexis,
Rather preoccupied with the gathering snow scene at the moment. So I have not combed this chapter for errors. Will do so at a later date if you want to email it to me.
This is a hoot . . . Oh no!
Cheers Alison
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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I think you will enjoy todays scribbles. Because this is all new to the story line, I'm having to think on my feet! I'll email this over later for you to have a look at when you have the time. Thank you! Alexis x
