~ Emotions ~
~ A poem about emotions ~11 total reviews
Comment from walbc
Oh I love this poem! You have crafted your words so beautifully, your rhyming and rhythm are perfect. Very descriptive writing evoking a lot of imagery. I don't know how you managed to write it with the first letter of each line spelling out EMOTIONS. Very clever. There's a name for such a poem but I've forgotten it. Your artwork choice is truly stunning. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Warm regards, Wendy.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Oh I love this poem! You have crafted your words so beautifully, your rhyming and rhythm are perfect. Very descriptive writing evoking a lot of imagery. I don't know how you managed to write it with the first letter of each line spelling out EMOTIONS. Very clever. There's a name for such a poem but I've forgotten it. Your artwork choice is truly stunning. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Warm regards, Wendy.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you so very much! I appreciate such encouragement from you....xoxo
Comment from jclark
My favorite poem type is the acrostic so I loved your format and nicely flowing piece. You chose an upbeat theme and yet showed how emotions ebb and flow and this awesome multi colored rose reflects that so kudos for a great picture choice. Best of luck in the contest. You are already a winner! Kindly, Judy
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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My favorite poem type is the acrostic so I loved your format and nicely flowing piece. You chose an upbeat theme and yet showed how emotions ebb and flow and this awesome multi colored rose reflects that so kudos for a great picture choice. Best of luck in the contest. You are already a winner! Kindly, Judy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you do very much my friend!! I truly apologize for the major delay on responfing. That's very unlike me. :( xoxo
Comment from dmt1967
I enjoyed reading this poem and I see you use two types of format her, the free verse and the acrostic poetry form as well. Good luck in the contest and I hope you do well and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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I enjoyed reading this poem and I see you use two types of format her, the free verse and the acrostic poetry form as well. Good luck in the contest and I hope you do well and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Hello my sweet friend!! Thank you so very much for the fantastic comment & rating. It means a lot to me. I am do do sorry for the major delay in responding....that's very unlike me. ; (
Comment from K. Lorraine
I loved how you used an acrostic poem as your entry. I never thought about changing it up a notch. Great job! The poem itself was outstanding too. I'm sure that you will be among the top contenders and possibly even the WIN. Thank you for sharing an outstanding entry...
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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I loved how you used an acrostic poem as your entry. I never thought about changing it up a notch. Great job! The poem itself was outstanding too. I'm sure that you will be among the top contenders and possibly even the WIN. Thank you for sharing an outstanding entry...
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you so very much!! I also apologize for the major delay in responding. That's very unlike me and I am so sorry..xoxo
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I understand... I'm backed up 15 messages to finish responding to. It's not like me either not to send a timely response. K. Lorraine
Comment from patcelaw
Emotions can be very difficult at times and sometimes our feeling will lie to us,, Good luck in the contest, Patricia
O ver a relationship can (be) bring such joy
It seems to me the word be should not be in the line.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Emotions can be very difficult at times and sometimes our feeling will lie to us,, Good luck in the contest, Patricia
O ver a relationship can (be) bring such joy
It seems to me the word be should not be in the line.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you so very much!! xoxo
Comment from Kingsland
I liked the thoughts in this poem and they relate to the acrostic really well.
You have an extra word in this one line that doesn't read right with it in the line.
Over a relationship can be bring such joy > The extra word is be.
I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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I liked the thoughts in this poem and they relate to the acrostic really well.
You have an extra word in this one line that doesn't read right with it in the line.
Over a relationship can be bring such joy > The extra word is be.
I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Hello....Thank you so much for your comment and rating. I truly appreciate thst. xoxo
Comment from leigholiver
lovely use of words, painted a picture in my head with each line.
Has made me want to attempt a poem myself, though its not on of my strong points.
The pic is really eye catching to, it pull's you towards the poem, making you want to read it.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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lovely use of words, painted a picture in my head with each line.
Has made me want to attempt a poem myself, though its not on of my strong points.
The pic is really eye catching to, it pull's you towards the poem, making you want to read it.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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thank you very much
Comment from alf collier
Hi to the unknown author. I hear so much cheerfulness in your words, such a great change from the lovelorn. Loved reading the flow of words and wouldn't change a thing. alf
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Hi to the unknown author. I hear so much cheerfulness in your words, such a great change from the lovelorn. Loved reading the flow of words and wouldn't change a thing. alf
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you very much for the great comment and rating!! I truly appreciate it. I also apologize for the major delay in responding. That's very unlike me. ; (
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This was a nice touch using an acrostic for the prompt.
Third line needs some work as it doesn't read well. Also some punctuation would help it flow better - second line morning, noon and night and I'm later on.
GMG
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reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Hi there,
This was a nice touch using an acrostic for the prompt.
Third line needs some work as it doesn't read well. Also some punctuation would help it flow better - second line morning, noon and night and I'm later on.
GMG
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you very much
Comment from Eric1
This is a wonderful and heartfelt Acrostic poem and a brilliant entry for this particular emotions competition, good rhyming couplets, a nine rhythm and a good flow will help your poem on it's way, good luck my friend.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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This is a wonderful and heartfelt Acrostic poem and a brilliant entry for this particular emotions competition, good rhyming couplets, a nine rhythm and a good flow will help your poem on it's way, good luck my friend.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you so very much Eric!!
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It was my pleasure my friend.
