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A Copper Coin

Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Hold your breath"
The beginnings of the Thief Hunter.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Patricia Dsouza
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Your writing is fabulous and graceful. I esteem the way you progress and flow throughout. You have an remarkably brilliant skills.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
    Thank you very much for your wonderful praise of my work Patricia Dsouza. Is there anything I need to improve upon in my writing that you can see? I am always striving to become an even better writer so I thank you again for your lovely review!

Comment from Jackreese
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You have an erray of different characters the story itself I found engaging. Skye and Noah's dialogue was written well and the ending of the chapter left the reader wanting more.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
    Thank you very much Jackreese :) I hope the next chapter lives up to expectations and any pointers/hints would be greatly appreciated.

    - Silence