The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "I see You"miscellaneous poems
26 total reviews
Comment from amada
Hi Michael, I finally found it! Wow! Frankly I am speechless, overridden by emotions and my mind is in blank. You know, you can capture my soul so very well...I am shy but my heart says volumes. What a magnificent touch!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hi Michael, I finally found it! Wow! Frankly I am speechless, overridden by emotions and my mind is in blank. You know, you can capture my soul so very well...I am shy but my heart says volumes. What a magnificent touch!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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I know you're shy...and I know you trust me...-smile-....and that makes me responsible....important....-smile- thank you Nancy....love Michael
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Michael,
hey brother, this had a real 'dance step involved in the words and tempo... and with that Spanish music of serenade... how could one not be swept away in the moment, as well as a magically composed set of words... you know I have nothing but respect for the way you combine... and this my Brother is sweet and eternal... truly found this as up there with your finest.
I'm sure Nancy will be swept away.
With our thoughts we create,
wins of butter fly fluttering,
James.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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Hi Michael,
hey brother, this had a real 'dance step involved in the words and tempo... and with that Spanish music of serenade... how could one not be swept away in the moment, as well as a magically composed set of words... you know I have nothing but respect for the way you combine... and this my Brother is sweet and eternal... truly found this as up there with your finest.
I'm sure Nancy will be swept away.
With our thoughts we create,
wins of butter fly fluttering,
James.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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HI James...-smile-....ahh I get off on it, I guess...used to anyway....not feeling it very much anymore Bro. Yes Nancy is wonderful Lady...wonder where she is....I think this happened with the last one too...lol.....she's very shy...I hope she liked it ....bug the big love bro...Michael
Comment from daeneam
Beautifully created for Valentine's day!
It's been a long time, dear Michael since the last time we communicated. How you've been?
The color, the photograph and the sweet poem complimented each other and illustrated an overflowing emotion from within your heart! Hmmmm...
I hope you are in the best of everything!
lovelots, c", Mae
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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Beautifully created for Valentine's day!
It's been a long time, dear Michael since the last time we communicated. How you've been?
The color, the photograph and the sweet poem complimented each other and illustrated an overflowing emotion from within your heart! Hmmmm...
I hope you are in the best of everything!
lovelots, c", Mae
Comment Written 15-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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Hey Mae...-smile- how are you Doc...? ahh I'm still alive which tortures my enemies...and gives many more hope...you see if I can live through this I just might be immortal...-wink- ahh its been and is still is tough...but I'm still swinging back....last man standing. Bugging the big love...Michael
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What happened?
Comment from Glasstruth
What a wonderfully sensual, hot, and passionate poem. It is overflowing with words that alone paint an unforgettable picture. The line: "I saw you" is amplified with you mentioning your poor eyesight. Shows that beauty can't be missed. Superbly written. Les
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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What a wonderfully sensual, hot, and passionate poem. It is overflowing with words that alone paint an unforgettable picture. The line: "I saw you" is amplified with you mentioning your poor eyesight. Shows that beauty can't be missed. Superbly written. Les
Comment Written 15-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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Hey Les...-smile- thank you Sir....Amen some ...but even still some never missed...because its owned....all your own...perfectly yours...-smile- bug the big love bro...Michael
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a tender, effective poem. I love your use of language, especially the Spanish phrases of love. It is a passionate poem bursting with sincere emotions. I also love your repetition at the end of the first stanza. You crafted this poem well. Your love shows through. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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This is a tender, effective poem. I love your use of language, especially the Spanish phrases of love. It is a passionate poem bursting with sincere emotions. I also love your repetition at the end of the first stanza. You crafted this poem well. Your love shows through. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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thank you very much....very happy you enjoyed it...I wrote it for a friend...much Gracias ...-smile-
Comment from madhatter1977
I like your words and feelings in this poem. I watched the video and found it suitable for a valentine's day poem! Enter it! Your use of music is excellent in accompaniment to your poetry - I actually bought a Lissie CD which was on one of your other poems. Keep writing my friend. Very best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2015
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I like your words and feelings in this poem. I watched the video and found it suitable for a valentine's day poem! Enter it! Your use of music is excellent in accompaniment to your poetry - I actually bought a Lissie CD which was on one of your other poems. Keep writing my friend. Very best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2015
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Hi Pete....-smile- thank you kind sir...always a pleasure my friend... alright, I love that song I used...but I haven't listened to her since is it good...? alright bug the big love-
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I like the album. Listening to a British band called xx now. They're good!
Comment from evesayshi
Five Stars, yes, indeed - you most certainly are a poet at heart, and I would venture to say in your views, insights and lifestyle as well. Your words and video were absolute romance, inspiring warmth within and without as I read the words and watched the tape. You could very well inspire a renaissance of romantic poetry perfection...
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Five Stars, yes, indeed - you most certainly are a poet at heart, and I would venture to say in your views, insights and lifestyle as well. Your words and video were absolute romance, inspiring warmth within and without as I read the words and watched the tape. You could very well inspire a renaissance of romantic poetry perfection...
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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why thank you Maam...-smile-....hm you know I hear that's the hardest form...Romancing perfection. I thank you for the candlelight. Bug the big love...Michael
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You are very welcome. Do write more...
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Comment from Ekim777
Your style and assurance has matured. You grasp your subject with both hands. I don't think your picture does the poem justice. -Just a point of view. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Your style and assurance has matured. You grasp your subject with both hands. I don't think your picture does the poem justice. -Just a point of view. -Ekim777
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Hi Ekim...-smile- good to see you sir. yea, some say my hat size too....lol ahh poets support comes and goes...its fickle world we live in...between the ears...-wink- hm really...you don't like the picture...because she has a butt...or because its uncovered....ah I thought it pretty....but then again I'm pretty much desperate at this point....for pretty. Bug the big love...Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
Fantastic piece with great imagery Too!
Thanks great work as always.. Ricky ....................................................................................................
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Fantastic piece with great imagery Too!
Thanks great work as always.. Ricky ....................................................................................................
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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1024 whats up Bro...-smile-...ahh thank you sir....glad to see you around. Wrote it for a friend.....hope she likes it, she very shy...I think the picture may have scared her away...haha....she's so cool...alright bug the big love !
Comment from Pili Pubul
Love this old song, is Lucho Gatica , no Lucio. Magnificent super romantic
poem to a terrific lady. Powerful, beautiful expressed feelings.
As always original and unique. Big hugs. Pili
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Love this old song, is Lucho Gatica , no Lucio. Magnificent super romantic
poem to a terrific lady. Powerful, beautiful expressed feelings.
As always original and unique. Big hugs. Pili
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Hello love bird...-smile- missed you very much....are you home now...? O..whoops let me fix that...you would know, you always do...-smile-...thank you sweetheart...I wrote you another one...hope you liked it...love you Michael
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Love u too ...
