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Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "Visit to the Rain forest"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

9 total reviews 
Comment from Judy Couch
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I like the descriptions of the things seen. I like its rhyme. I love the way it ends with recognition that these things may not be here much longer.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    Thanks Judy for your comments. So glad you enjoyed the visit.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Great descriptions of the rain forest life. I like the endangered aspect you included. I see nothing to change. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    Thanks jannypan,
    so glad you enjoyed this one.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from RYME4U
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Nicely done. This rhymes well and has smooth rhythm. The descriptions of the rainforest animals are excellent. This is nicely presented. I love the Kinkajou picture

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    Thanks so much for your great review. I have never seen a live Kinkajou, but I think he is a cute little guy.
    :-) Carolyn
reply by RYME4U on 13-Feb-2015
    They are cute. They live in Australia. Never saw a real one either.You're welcome!
Comment from Ben Colder
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I liked this one much. No doubt a winner in my book. Never had a six to award you so I will vote for instead. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks Ben,
    I will cherish the virtual six. The 'committee' dis-qualified the poem because I didn't mention being lost. LOL.. I guess I need to read the rules better.
    So glad you enjoyed this one, it was fun to research and write.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from fimarie78
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I really enjoyed this poem. It had a nice quirky style and rhythm. You described a vast array of animals very well. You had obviously done your research. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    Thanks for stopping by and yes the research was fun. So glad you enjoyed the poem.. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a delightful piece strong in imagery and natural flow throughout. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the great review. So glad you enjoyed the visit.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from juliebookly
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Hmmmm. This poem is nice. The rhythm and flow is very liquid. I like the poem. The use of imagery is also very strong. Well done and keep up the good work

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks juliebookly,
    I am delighted you enjoyed this one and appreciate your comments and fine rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from robina1978
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Gorgeous photo that complements your poem very well. I assume you did research on which animals live in the rain forest. First about the animals and at the end: endangered rain forest. It rhymes and flows all the way. Best wishes for the prompt.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks robina,
    yes I did research on the internet. It was fun to do and then write the poem. So glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from alf collier
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Hi to the unknown author. A very worthy contender for the rainforest prompt, I think. Your descriptions of animals lead me to believe your rainforest is somewhere in Asia? not sure. Anyway, loved the poem, alf

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Thanks Alf.. my rainforest is on the internet.. LOL.. So glad you enjoyed this , it was such fun to imagine and write. :-)