I've Got Your Back
No matter who you are, big brother Jesus has your back.46 total reviews
Comment from jim lawler
A nice read. You did a great job with it and your choice of words is fitting. I didn't see any typos And it needs no revision. I wish you the very best in the contest. Good luck and god bless! Jimmy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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A nice read. You did a great job with it and your choice of words is fitting. I didn't see any typos And it needs no revision. I wish you the very best in the contest. Good luck and god bless! Jimmy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those five beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
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you're so very welcome! Jimmy
Comment from artisart4u
This is nice, it covered a lot of people who needed assurance and God does have your back.
Each person you told their thoughts and ended up in the last two lines repeating "Remember ...." This I liked very much.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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This is nice, it covered a lot of people who needed assurance and God does have your back.
Each person you told their thoughts and ended up in the last two lines repeating "Remember ...." This I liked very much.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
Comment from NurseBarb
Excellent writing in a very uplifting and spiritual poem that was a pure delight to read. A little moral in each stanza is a unique writing approach and to include our Heavenly Father as the focus of your poem was inspirational. Good luck in this contest. I real winner here for me.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
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Excellent writing in a very uplifting and spiritual poem that was a pure delight to read. A little moral in each stanza is a unique writing approach and to include our Heavenly Father as the focus of your poem was inspirational. Good luck in this contest. I real winner here for me.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
Comment from K. Lorraine
Thank you for an example about the contest prompt. I understood what having someone's back means, but a little unclear about to write a poem about the topic. Your poem has a lot of merit in the context of each person to whom you are watching over. Thank you for sharing. I especially like your author's notes about we are never alone because God is always there and he has our back without question...
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you for an example about the contest prompt. I understood what having someone's back means, but a little unclear about to write a poem about the topic. Your poem has a lot of merit in the context of each person to whom you are watching over. Thank you for sharing. I especially like your author's notes about we are never alone because God is always there and he has our back without question...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those five beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
Comment from Aussie
Go out on a limb, that is where the fruit is - just as well that tortoise had backup! A well put together story/poem. Liked the inclusion of the Hippocratic oath. If we leave it to Jesus, he does have our back - standing beside us in times of trouble and happiness too.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Go out on a limb, that is where the fruit is - just as well that tortoise had backup! A well put together story/poem. Liked the inclusion of the Hippocratic oath. If we leave it to Jesus, he does have our back - standing beside us in times of trouble and happiness too.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
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We love Him because He first loved us. Too many have turned away from Him because of all the bad things happening in the world today. May He who loves us, hug and care for you. Kay XX
Agreed.
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Deniz22
Wonderful attitude presented here even though it has some error associated with it. As you no doubt know, the promises of God to be with us are reserved for those who have trusted Christ and been born-again. I really don't want to discourage your compassion for all, which is beautiful, but only hope you will be encouraged to add discernment to your writings. In this way you honor the Lord and are not providing a false hope to non-believers.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Wonderful attitude presented here even though it has some error associated with it. As you no doubt know, the promises of God to be with us are reserved for those who have trusted Christ and been born-again. I really don't want to discourage your compassion for all, which is beautiful, but only hope you will be encouraged to add discernment to your writings. In this way you honor the Lord and are not providing a false hope to non-believers.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
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Embrace the Love from above!
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Made possible by the sacrifice of Christ...who shall separate us from the love of God...
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Comment from jaeladarling
God is certainly bigger than all our problems, and He does care about each of us individually. I think we tend to forget that sometimes, especially when life gets tough. Thanks for the reminder. I hope all who read it are encouraged. :)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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God is certainly bigger than all our problems, and He does care about each of us individually. I think we tend to forget that sometimes, especially when life gets tough. Thanks for the reminder. I hope all who read it are encouraged. :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Dr Nad,
I enjoyed both the concept in this and the allegories you employ to put the message over. Very nicely done, it carries your message very well.
Patrick
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Dr Nad,
I enjoyed both the concept in this and the allegories you employ to put the message over. Very nicely done, it carries your message very well.
Patrick
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
Comment from McMurry903
This is wonderful and refreshingly original. Your poem really engages the reader with so many common examples. Good bits of humor and use of rhyme in the appropriate places.
Well crafted with a great positive message too! I enjoyed very much!
Brian
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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This is wonderful and refreshingly original. Your poem really engages the reader with so many common examples. Good bits of humor and use of rhyme in the appropriate places.
Well crafted with a great positive message too! I enjoyed very much!
Brian
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
Comment from acerisestory
This is a well-crafted poem with a powerful message, Dr. Nad! I cannot imagine the work you put into this thoughtful write.
I very much like the repetition of:
"Remember, I'm your brother
and I've got your back."
It very much adds to the impact of your poem. Your occasional rhyme adds to the flow and rhythm of your well chosen words.
Well done, my friend, and best of luck in the contest! Alana
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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This is a well-crafted poem with a powerful message, Dr. Nad! I cannot imagine the work you put into this thoughtful write.
I very much like the repetition of:
"Remember, I'm your brother
and I've got your back."
It very much adds to the impact of your poem. Your occasional rhyme adds to the flow and rhythm of your well chosen words.
Well done, my friend, and best of luck in the contest! Alana
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I would like to thank you so very much for taking the time to read and then to review my poem, ?I've got your back?. I would also like to thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement that accentuated your response to me. I am honored that you have given this piece those six beautiful stars. My motivation for writing the Poem was to remind all of us in a repetitive way, that we are not alone and our big brother Jesus, the King of Kings and Lord of lords, is watching out for God?s children, no matter what their lot in life happens to be! Thanks again. May God bless you!
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You are very welcome! Alana
Embrace the Love from above!
