BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Undoing the Damage "Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
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Comment from royowen
Revenge is sweet, or is it? Blaze, having told Lorna, half the story about Sebastion they decide to go out on the town, they might as well spend Luke's money, as a reward, but I'm glad that Blaze helped Lorna to overcome, things. They are all a little spotted anyway, well done, you're a raconteur Phyllis, blessings, Rpy.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Revenge is sweet, or is it? Blaze, having told Lorna, half the story about Sebastion they decide to go out on the town, they might as well spend Luke's money, as a reward, but I'm glad that Blaze helped Lorna to overcome, things. They are all a little spotted anyway, well done, you're a raconteur Phyllis, blessings, Rpy.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Roy. No one has ever called me that. In fact, I can't recall the last time I saw or heard the word raconteur. I like it... thanks for the compliment. :)
Comment from Jay Squires
Is this the final chapter, Phyllis? Everything's been resolved.
Well, you could stir up a few more things in the dance studio, I suppose.
No, really, I think it was a good run, but it's over.
She attempted a smile, but it appeared that her heart wasn't in it. [You can get rid of the "that".]
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Is this the final chapter, Phyllis? Everything's been resolved.
Well, you could stir up a few more things in the dance studio, I suppose.
No, really, I think it was a good run, but it's over.
She attempted a smile, but it appeared that her heart wasn't in it. [You can get rid of the "that".]
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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LOL! No, it's the halfway mark. THe BIG story is yet to come, the event that changes Blaze's outlook and sets her new course. I'd say that chapter comes up in about a week. The second half of the book will show her mellowing and rethinking her job for Luke. The last book, DEMON, where Ginger repented and was redeemed, had two parts also, the second after her redemption. Blaze won't be redeemed, but... you'll see. Tara will play a bigger part, as will the twins and Theo and the dance group. But it's not about THEM, just about how they affect Blaze.
Comment from rmj09
The focus Lorna. The storyline development Blaze tells Lorna about what Blake did before he disappeared. When Lorna discovers that Blaze and Blake had sex on the day he disappeared she realized she would be the bride and Blaze the mistress. Blaze talks Lorna to go clubbing.
The dialogue is clear and the narrative shows the action.
Keep on writing.
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The focus Lorna. The storyline development Blaze tells Lorna about what Blake did before he disappeared. When Lorna discovers that Blaze and Blake had sex on the day he disappeared she realized she would be the bride and Blaze the mistress. Blaze talks Lorna to go clubbing.
The dialogue is clear and the narrative shows the action.
Keep on writing.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much, Rita. Have a great weekend. :)
