A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Anonymity"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
61 total reviews
Comment from DALLAS01
Wow, Dean. This is one powerful volcanic eruption. Look out for the lava flow to follow. Hope whatever it is, you got it off your chest. Personally, I think this is one of your best.
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Wow, Dean. This is one powerful volcanic eruption. Look out for the lava flow to follow. Hope whatever it is, you got it off your chest. Personally, I think this is one of your best.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Geez! I truly hope that whoever this is atones before it is too late. Another amazing write of which you can be proud even if you are ranting. I guess it is always better to get things off your chest and not let them fester into actions. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Geez! I truly hope that whoever this is atones before it is too late. Another amazing write of which you can be proud even if you are ranting. I guess it is always better to get things off your chest and not let them fester into actions. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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I'm afraid it is already much too late for that, my dear Monica. However, if you'd like to help, I could use some assistance in digging a rather large hole in the field just behind my house, if you feel so inclined, heh-heh...
Thanks very much for your review. :)
~Dean
Comment from write hand blue
That's a nice horrific rant, but who is it aimed at. A nice diabolic twist.
Nice choice of colours yellow and black go together well.
Composed for maximum effect with a unique word selection.
Written to a high standard and inventive.
Good poem.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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That's a nice horrific rant, but who is it aimed at. A nice diabolic twist.
Nice choice of colours yellow and black go together well.
Composed for maximum effect with a unique word selection.
Written to a high standard and inventive.
Good poem.
:) mel.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you very much, Mel. So sorry about the lengthy delay in responding. I've been a little under the weather lately. As always, I really appreciate your comments and review. :)
~Dean
Comment from JanetRussek
Hello Dean and thank you for the very unique and intimidating read. Lots to think about in a most unusual and perplexing way.
Warm Regards,
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Hello Dean and thank you for the very unique and intimidating read. Lots to think about in a most unusual and perplexing way.
Warm Regards,
Janet
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much for the outstanding review, Janet. I certainly appreciate it. :)
~Dean
Comment from Pearl Edwards
So this was written with anger as well as evil in mind, whatever it is as always well penned. The line
I'll open up your every scar, then squeeze out all your dreams....
like that one. Liked them all, as a rant it's a great read.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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So this was written with anger as well as evil in mind, whatever it is as always well penned. The line
I'll open up your every scar, then squeeze out all your dreams....
like that one. Liked them all, as a rant it's a great read.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much, Pearl, and I'm really glad you liked it. I can tell you this, I feel much better having gotten it off of my chest, LOL. ~Dean
Comment from rtobaygo
Hello
WOW, what powerful imagery...haunting, visceral, evil and black as pitch, presented with such rhyming ease. Kudos!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
PS: OOS
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Hello
WOW, what powerful imagery...haunting, visceral, evil and black as pitch, presented with such rhyming ease. Kudos!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
PS: OOS
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Ray, and you do the same, my friend. :)
~Dean
Comment from Writingfundimension
Super poem, Dean. These days, Anonymous is becoming quite famous and very, very busy. Loved this line:
'I'll open up your every scar, then squeeze out all your dreams...'
:) Bev
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Super poem, Dean. These days, Anonymous is becoming quite famous and very, very busy. Loved this line:
'I'll open up your every scar, then squeeze out all your dreams...'
:) Bev
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much, Bev. I appreciate your comments as always. :) ~Dean
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You're very welcome, Dean. :)
Comment from patcelaw
Bravo Dean for this. it is frustrating when one is anon and we cannot know to whom we could respond and how we should respond. Blessings Brother, Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Bravo Dean for this. it is frustrating when one is anon and we cannot know to whom we could respond and how we should respond. Blessings Brother, Patricia
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thanks very much for reviewing and sharing your thoughts with me on the poem. Yes, it is very frustrating indeed. :) ~Dean
Comment from GWHARGIS
WOW. Let me introduce myself, I am Gretchen Hargis. Please don't dedicate anything to me. LOL. This was really terrifying. I loved it, nonetheless, but it did freak me out. My fave line was the Donner party line. Even though I know they did it to survive, there is just something so chilling about it. I guess it is knowing how low you can sink in order to survive. Great poem that should wake up any anonymous. Great rant. Purge, baby, purge. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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WOW. Let me introduce myself, I am Gretchen Hargis. Please don't dedicate anything to me. LOL. This was really terrifying. I loved it, nonetheless, but it did freak me out. My fave line was the Donner party line. Even though I know they did it to survive, there is just something so chilling about it. I guess it is knowing how low you can sink in order to survive. Great poem that should wake up any anonymous. Great rant. Purge, baby, purge. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Hah-ha, thank you, Gretchen. I must admit I feel much better now having gotten it off my chest, LOL. I sincerely appreciate your comments as always. :)~Dean
Comment from Alan K Pease
A very scary poem for what I feel is that "anonymity" is you. There are times when I feel you are too good a story teller, hard to determine which is best. I wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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A very scary poem for what I feel is that "anonymity" is you. There are times when I feel you are too good a story teller, hard to determine which is best. I wish I had a six.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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That's very kind of you, Alan, but no six is ever necessary. I run out of my meager allotment almost as fast as they're replenished. There are so many talented poets and authors here, yourself included, that I find them quite difficult to hold on to.
Much obliged for the review.~Dean