Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I decided I had a little extra time at breakfast this morning and decided to spend it with you. I'm glad I caught this post because I'm sure it would have been out of my pm box by morning. Good writing job

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thank you so much, Barbara. Hope you had a good day at school. :)

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Barbara, I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, CLICK HERE.

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

CLICK HERE.

Comment from rmj09

Excellent

The focus is Larry J Blair. The storyline development after Blaze leaves Luke she drops in on Beez. Asking for the location of Larry Blair. After some convincing and Beez having trouble finding the computer file he needs. Blaze tells him to go get something to drink or eat while she finds the file. She finds it and the information she needs. Then comes out and bookmarks the file for Beez. He comes back drunk and tries to get handzy with Blaze who grabs the stapler and puts one in his head. He tells her she has changed. She is on her way to level 16 and Larry Blair.
The dialogue is clear and showing new aspects of the character as well as mental pictures. The narrative shows action the staple into Beez's head. Blaze working on the computer.
The hook what does Blaze plan to do with Larry?
Keep on writing.

Phyllis, it is a beautiful day the diamond dust is sparkling against a white background. The sun shines brighter then a thousand moons. Colder then cold since you feel the frost develop within your nose. Have a great weekend. Walk in the shadow of our Lord. *o* Rita

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thank you, Rita. Yes, the sun is shining and making the snow sparkle, but it's COLD out there. Supposed to start melting come Saturday. We'll see. :)

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

I think the term they used on the census forms up until the 30s was "idiotic" to cover all of those who where mentally challenged. I find it hilarious that Google is such a prominent component of hell! It would seem like they would have some great hackers down there. Another great chapter. This is such a well-developed world that it could be visited endlessly without us readers losing interest. :) mikey

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thank you so much, Mikey. After the book is done, I plan to write short stories about Luke's Hell. :)

reply by michaelcahill on 05-Feb-2015

That's a great idea!!!!

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Did I forget something? Who Is Lawrence Blair? How is she connected to him?

Language is interesting. Words don't become offensive until we use them offensive and then agree as a society that they are offensive.

Retardation was acceptable when I first started working in that field. Then everyone started calling people they wanted to insult "retards or tards". Turning it from a medical word to an insult. When I retired it was expected that we say, mentally challenged.

The word Piss is in the bible because the English speakers in King James's time were not offended by it. To them it meant "to urinate." Somehow meaning changed and now some people is some circle consider it cussing.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks, Carolyn. Scroll back to chapter 29, "Larry Blair" and read the first few paragraphs. That explains it all.

You're right about language. Rules change so quickly, too. When I was a child, Negro was polite, as was colored. Then the new laws against segregation passed and black became the right word. In college, it had to be Afro American. Then it went back to black. Now, they demand we say African American, seven syllables, and not even accurate for many blacks. I think this whole PC thing is ridiculous. Pick a name and stick with it, fergodssake! :)

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Phyllis, this is a good installment at it adds humor to the serious intentions of Blaze. Never ending battle plans.
:0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thank you so much, GracieAnn. :)

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

HMM I must have missed a chapter - what does Blaze need with a child abuser? How responsive are the souls in hell? Do they talk and act like the demons do? Or are they just in torment?

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks, Maria. Larry Blair is Lorna Blair's father. He sexually molested her when she was a little girl. It made her fear sex and almost ruined her life. Blaze wanted to be sure Larry was getting sufficient punishment.

The souls are Lucifer's slaves, unless they are in a firepit being torment by the fire which burns but never destroys the flesh. Many demons do jobs too, but generally they are in charge of the slaves/sould/

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

It seems like one of the most popular categories of the condemned in He'll is that of lawyer. And lawyers often end as politicians. Hmmmm....

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Yep. If we could just get the idiots out of Congress, things would improve. Maybe the

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A lot of hoops to jump through to get the information. The list gave you a chance to jab once again at lawyers and politicians. Good characterization of disorganized and alcoholic Beez. Now on to the next.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks so much, Shari. :)

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Shari, I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent


I get it, so what you're telling me is 87.9% of everyone we run into in a normal day fits into one of the three categories. I'm starting to understand why I avoid most people. Thanks for another fine chapter, and don't even say what you are thinking. Hope you are back to 100%. :-)


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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
Thanks, Ric. It does seem that way sometimes, doesn't it? They seem to gravitate towards politics, I've found. The other half of the Bell curve contains you and I and all the people we find tolerable, I guess. LOL! Actually, the curve is wide at the top, where most people are hovering around 100, normal and supposedly harmless. Supposedly. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
Ric, I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from Dustybones

Excellent


Definitions of Moron, Imbecile, Idiot: In order of intelligence levels, I'll have to remember that, Idiots are the lowest, then the imbeciles. Morons go from 50-70. That news to me. Average is 100. wow. That's a tight gradient. Seriously interesting. I took a IQ test after I had a semi-concussion. They wanted to see if I was a moron for snowboarding alone, I suppose. I was delirious and delusional for about two weeks right after I hit my head going down the mountain. I do remember being delirious and delusional stuck in the Utah Hospital. It was actually fun being so, but dangerous too, as I didn't know why I was in the hospital, so I got dressed and walked out the front door. I go about three miles away and a cop saw me and took me back. It was fun trying to escape. I thought the hospital was a nut house, and was smart enough to know I didn't belong in a pysch ward. Took over a year to regain my sense of balance too. I passed the IQ test with flying colors, too. What a trip that was, back in 2011. Now this year I went snowboarding for the first time since, and sprain my ankle. All I can think of is what a idiot I was to fall down, and get hurt. Maybe I'm only a moron for falling down, for sure I was stupid. Cya.


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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
Wow, what a story. You're lucky to be alive with that much of an impact. Yet you STILL went snowboarding?

Thanks so much for your interesting review. :)
reply by Dustybones on 04-Feb-2015
Remember three years had past, and I missed the sport. I went on a Tuesday, had so much fun, I went again on Saturday.
It was a very very stupid type of fall. I was just getting off the lift chair. Someone was falling down in front of me while getting off and I goofed and fell the wrong way. Very much an accident, but even still...Good news is no bones cracked, and it's feeling better each day. Thank for asking.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review,