Let's Talk Dirty!
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Time to log on."The story about three women who need to make money
13 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
What an enjoyable hoot this chapter was. Reading about the three and their alter egos was fun. Wow, I could pretend to be Robert Downey Jr's dream girl and pretend every caller was him!!
I thought I saw one questionable line, but I've gone back and reread twice, with no luck in finding it. So, it just may have been okay!!
Aha....who's at the other end of that phone and how will it go?!
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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What an enjoyable hoot this chapter was. Reading about the three and their alter egos was fun. Wow, I could pretend to be Robert Downey Jr's dream girl and pretend every caller was him!!
I thought I saw one questionable line, but I've gone back and reread twice, with no luck in finding it. So, it just may have been okay!!
Aha....who's at the other end of that phone and how will it go?!
Comment Written 19-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Now there's a thought! Part of my research before I wrote this book was to buy a book called 'How to talk Dirty' (a whole 150 pages long) It was written by the woman who was featured in the documentary I refer to in the book, and although there were no tips on how to actually talk dirty, it told you how she had perfected her craft in her mid fifties, and now earned thousands a week working from home. She calls it her 'acting job' because she pretends to be a sixteen year old, a twenty year old, a granny, in fact any age or nationality the caller wants. Would I do it? Well, let's just say if I don't start making some money from this book, I might have to! Alexis xxx
Comment from Glasstruth
One of the best chapters I read so far. Quite entertaining, in how they prepare and try to boost their confidence, saying at their age they should be able to handle anything except for the real sicko's. I think there's still a little bit of fear which they don't want to admit. There's tension here, which is good for the reader. Kept me wanting for more to happen, what was next was the thriller in this. Deserves a sixer, but my bank is empty. Great!!!! Les
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
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One of the best chapters I read so far. Quite entertaining, in how they prepare and try to boost their confidence, saying at their age they should be able to handle anything except for the real sicko's. I think there's still a little bit of fear which they don't want to admit. There's tension here, which is good for the reader. Kept me wanting for more to happen, what was next was the thriller in this. Deserves a sixer, but my bank is empty. Great!!!! Les
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
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I really appreciate the compliment, Les. I know we're not supposed to ask for reviews, but I would really appreciate your opinion on the next couple of chapters, should you get the chance to read them. No need for a six, I feel privileged enough to receive your reviews! Alexis x
Comment from Cat of Letters
Hi again,
I am really enjoying this. I shall be hunting around to find Part Two.
It has a great 'Bridgette Jones' feel to it. It's fun and it's different. I hope you manage to do well with this, and get it published.
I very rarely read chick lit, type books, but I find this one highly enjoyable.
Cheers,
Alison
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Hi again,
I am really enjoying this. I shall be hunting around to find Part Two.
It has a great 'Bridgette Jones' feel to it. It's fun and it's different. I hope you manage to do well with this, and get it published.
I very rarely read chick lit, type books, but I find this one highly enjoyable.
Cheers,
Alison
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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You couldn't pay me a greater compliment because getting this turned into a film is my main aim. With three very different characters, it should be three times the fun! I do hope you enjoy the rest so much. Thank you!
Alexis x
Comment from G.B. Smith
I am in for another six. These girls are gonna get their tits in wringer ig they aint careful...Men want to see a sexy smile and tight body because they can't really can't see em. Anyone ever wander in and the shit will hit the fan. Best of luck Ladies. This will be fun???
Bear
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
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I am in for another six. These girls are gonna get their tits in wringer ig they aint careful...Men want to see a sexy smile and tight body because they can't really can't see em. Anyone ever wander in and the shit will hit the fan. Best of luck Ladies. This will be fun???
Bear
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
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Lol, you are so funny! Yep, there are going to be a few hilarious scenes with regard to what the girls get up to when they start working from their own places. Remember, Karen's husband still has a key... Thank you, Bear. Your reviews always bring a smile to my face! Alexis x
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Alexis, great work mate. I am getting nervous now, because I know exactly how I would feel if it were me. I don't usually read sexy stuff but I will read yours because I enjoy your work and this book so much. Very well done, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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G'day Alexis, great work mate. I am getting nervous now, because I know exactly how I would feel if it were me. I don't usually read sexy stuff but I will read yours because I enjoy your work and this book so much. Very well done, cheers Fez
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Good on you, Mate! Fortunately it's more funny than sexy. I wouldn't like to see the more delicate minded Fanstorians reaching for the smelling salts. I shall keep my X rated version for the publishers! Alexis x
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Bugger that! Give me some first. Delia is so proud that I'm reading your stuff mate. Cheers and keep writing, Fez
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
So they need dutch courage to get
the three of them going - at least
they could laugh about it all.
And now Michael is on the line again.
A well presented chapter, Alexis.
Margaret
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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So they need dutch courage to get
the three of them going - at least
they could laugh about it all.
And now Michael is on the line again.
A well presented chapter, Alexis.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Yes, I even let Karen break her diet and have some white wine! Thank you so much for your review. Alexis x
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oow, it's started! This is so much fun, it is so natural, and realistic. I can actually see them sitting there thinking the phone wouldn't stop ringing. LOL. You are writing this so well, Alexis, I wonder how many of your reviewers are taking notes! LOL. I can't stop, got to go read the next one! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Oow, it's started! This is so much fun, it is so natural, and realistic. I can actually see them sitting there thinking the phone wouldn't stop ringing. LOL. You are writing this so well, Alexis, I wonder how many of your reviewers are taking notes! LOL. I can't stop, got to go read the next one! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Sandra. As you know, I've been dreading this bit! Alexis x
Comment from rwilliam
Jenny gave her a high five. 'Halle-bloody-lujah!-LOVE LOVE -LVOE! :-D
HAhaaaaa ha, I love that as soon as she heads for the loo, Michael calls and then the other line rings. I just have to say, once again, how much i love how you write. SO fun to read.
I didn't see anything to fix. Great work!!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Jenny gave her a high five. 'Halle-bloody-lujah!-LOVE LOVE -LVOE! :-D
HAhaaaaa ha, I love that as soon as she heads for the loo, Michael calls and then the other line rings. I just have to say, once again, how much i love how you write. SO fun to read.
I didn't see anything to fix. Great work!!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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And I love your reviews! Thank you, my friend. You have made me smile, yet again. Alexis xxx
Comment from adewpearl
you convey well their nervousness as their first day of being phone sex operators approaches
I like the conversation they have about how they'd react if a guy is an over-the-top pervert
fun conversation about the photos they use to represent themselves and why the choice
good discussion of what kind of sex they're willing to play act doing
Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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you convey well their nervousness as their first day of being phone sex operators approaches
I like the conversation they have about how they'd react if a guy is an over-the-top pervert
fun conversation about the photos they use to represent themselves and why the choice
good discussion of what kind of sex they're willing to play act doing
Brooke
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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I wrote this the only way I could, by pretending I was one of them. Thank goodness for my research!
Comment from MelB
A very interesting chapter on how they have picked the characters they are going to play and what their character will look like. I can understand why they would feel apprehensive about what kinds of calls and weird dudes they will have to deal with on the phone.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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A very interesting chapter on how they have picked the characters they are going to play and what their character will look like. I can understand why they would feel apprehensive about what kinds of calls and weird dudes they will have to deal with on the phone.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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There are some real nasty people out there but fortunately the girls have opted for low paying middle of the road sites that don't specialize in the weird stuff. Just as well because I couldn't write about it otherwise! Alexis x
