Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Ine - an acrostic appropriate for the times we live in. These people are everywhere around us - in cafes, line the recent event in Australia, and France where horror struck. Thank you for your poem. Warm regards Dorothy

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Effective acrostic with a message to all the readers.
There is that underlying plea to us to pray to God to rid us of the terrorists

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Urban terror has become an international problem in modern times. The wild west used to be bad, but this is like a modern version of it.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day ine. This is another great little piece mate. It is just so sad about all this horrible stuff that keeps happening. When will it stop. Well done my friend, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely weekend.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This was an effective piece of acrostic poetry. Good word choice. Coming across more of a plea to God rather than a complete denouement.

GMG

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely weekend.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Terrorists. The most despicable type are domestic terrorists, I feel. Traitors to their own country and ways of life. They should line them all up against a wall and shoot them like the scum they are. Don't even waste time and energy burying them either. Just like the carrion eaters have a feast.

~Dean

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely weekend. I completely agree.

reply by Dean Kuch on 31-Jan-2015

You're very welcome, Ine, and you do the same. ;)

~Dean

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Robina, this is a very well written acrostic poem my friend, it sums up everything about these vile people and how they must answer to their own God.

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely weekend.

reply by Eric1 on 31-Jan-2015

You are welcome Robina.