His body etched..
Signed, sealed, and delivered.86 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The art work was brilliant for the words written.
Christ suffered so much for us all. He died for us all
He loved us all and forgave us our sins and saving us all from hell.
honey tree
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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The art work was brilliant for the words written.
Christ suffered so much for us all. He died for us all
He loved us all and forgave us our sins and saving us all from hell.
honey tree
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thank you so much for the inspiring review, great comments and stars, blessings, Roy,
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Glad you liked the review Roy
Annie
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Thank you so much.
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Liked what you wrote a lot.
Annie
Comment from Maria C.
You know I love this one! My goodness you told the story well in this poem. Too many good descriptive lines to list. I would be listing most lines. I love the way you worded the third verse. Awesome closing lines. Super meter and great rhyming couplets. Great content, great mechanic and a story well told.
This is a six for sure.
Hugs,
Maria C.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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You know I love this one! My goodness you told the story well in this poem. Too many good descriptive lines to list. I would be listing most lines. I love the way you worded the third verse. Awesome closing lines. Super meter and great rhyming couplets. Great content, great mechanic and a story well told.
This is a six for sure.
Hugs,
Maria C.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks Maria, wonderful comments, inspiring reviews and lovely stars, blessings, my friend, YBIC. Roy.
Comment from LouiseSimpson
Spoken from the heart.
Cause for reflection.
Well written. It flowed well.
You feel the pain and suffering.
I don't know how you can improve on this.
It's beautiful.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Spoken from the heart.
Cause for reflection.
Well written. It flowed well.
You feel the pain and suffering.
I don't know how you can improve on this.
It's beautiful.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks Louise, for the great review, and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This poem is amazing. I couldn't help but give you a six star, because it's soooo gooooddd. The rhythm is right on and how the lines and words work is so well done. You sure have a gift of writing poetry, dear writing friend.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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This poem is amazing. I couldn't help but give you a six star, because it's soooo gooooddd. The rhythm is right on and how the lines and words work is so well done. You sure have a gift of writing poetry, dear writing friend.
Drew xx
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks Drew for this amazingly uplifting review and great comments Drew, blessings,
Roy.
Comment from us2bdowe
Beautifully written. It flows so natural with a rhythm that is easy to follow and rhymes that do sound forces. Reading this gave me a sense of peace and makes me feel humble. Great work.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Beautifully written. It flows so natural with a rhythm that is easy to follow and rhymes that do sound forces. Reading this gave me a sense of peace and makes me feel humble. Great work.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanksfor the great review, and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Irish Rain
This is a wonderful poem about Christ's Passion. I prefer the softer image...I never saw the movie due to its graphic nature, but I attended the Catholic Churches RCIA class for 2 years, and they went into great detail about all of it. Even the sweating of blood, which a person can actually do under great duress. Wonderful poem!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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This is a wonderful poem about Christ's Passion. I prefer the softer image...I never saw the movie due to its graphic nature, but I attended the Catholic Churches RCIA class for 2 years, and they went into great detail about all of it. Even the sweating of blood, which a person can actually do under great duress. Wonderful poem!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks Judy, for the great review, and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, clear and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the poem as well as the author's notes. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, clear and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the poem as well as the author's notes. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from LIJ Red
Mankind, doomed and in misery sooner or later, will seek a way to survive. If God didn't exist, Voltaire( I think) said we would create him. The universe is pretty
obvious-the trick is finding and following the one true God. At any rate your quatrains of rhyming couplets are excellent.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Mankind, doomed and in misery sooner or later, will seek a way to survive. If God didn't exist, Voltaire( I think) said we would create him. The universe is pretty
obvious-the trick is finding and following the one true God. At any rate your quatrains of rhyming couplets are excellent.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Roy, you didn't hold back on this one at all. It is filled with vivid imagery that clearly gets the message across.
Teresa
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Roy, you didn't hold back on this one at all. It is filled with vivid imagery that clearly gets the message across.
Teresa
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you Teresa, for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I like the choice of artwork. A very well written poem and a great story to tell. Rhymes are spot-on and never forced. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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I like the choice of artwork. A very well written poem and a great story to tell. Rhymes are spot-on and never forced. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much Debbie, for the excellent review, rating and comments, blessings, Roy.
