Evil Mind
evil mind..... a free verse63 total reviews
Comment from JPilcher
You had my heart at "Criminal Mind". Oh my, sounds awful, right? Well, let it be known I just hold a certain passion for the subject (per se). Originally majored in Criminal Justice - but turns out that passion I had - was an over abundance of such. I know, right?
Your title had me in the door (obviously), your illustration was SPOT ON, and your words were simple, short - and perfect. Well done. :) <3
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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You had my heart at "Criminal Mind". Oh my, sounds awful, right? Well, let it be known I just hold a certain passion for the subject (per se). Originally majored in Criminal Justice - but turns out that passion I had - was an over abundance of such. I know, right?
Your title had me in the door (obviously), your illustration was SPOT ON, and your words were simple, short - and perfect. Well done. :) <3
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks a lot for considering this well done and thanks too for pointing out what you like in the poem. I am deeply humbled. God bless.
Comment from JJ Rowe
Vile vexed voices is excellent. showing that all dangerous people must be insane. Nicely written with a clear story and nice flow. Good job!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Vile vexed voices is excellent. showing that all dangerous people must be insane. Nicely written with a clear story and nice flow. Good job!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for considering this a good job. I am deeply humbled.
Comment from BCScot
A great piece, and I like the pic as well. The second stanza is great, wonderful wording, vile, vexed voices! Thanks for sharing with us, you deserved the accolades.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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A great piece, and I like the pic as well. The second stanza is great, wonderful wording, vile, vexed voices! Thanks for sharing with us, you deserved the accolades.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for considering this a great piece. sorry for the late reply.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It must be truly awful to have an evil mind that not only seeks to hurt others, but it destroys the person he having to live with it. Surely people are not born evil? I don't know, but there are a lot out there. Your poem was very dark and powerful. Scary! xsx sandra
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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It must be truly awful to have an evil mind that not only seeks to hurt others, but it destroys the person he having to live with it. Surely people are not born evil? I don't know, but there are a lot out there. Your poem was very dark and powerful. Scary! xsx sandra
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for considering this very powerful sandra. I appreciate your great review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi nassus1957
Criminal mind? Or a seriously disturbed one? The psychopath is indeed a fascinating study. Your poem touches on several of the key features, the ability to turn off their own emotions and focus on the desire to hurt someone else.
Well done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Hi nassus1957
Criminal mind? Or a seriously disturbed one? The psychopath is indeed a fascinating study. Your poem touches on several of the key features, the ability to turn off their own emotions and focus on the desire to hurt someone else.
Well done.
Patrick
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for considering this well done and sorry for my late reply.
Comment from DALLAS01
a raging funnel
sweeps dust
into his ears
with vile,
In addition to the criminal mind, this stanza is a perfect metaphor for schizophrenia.
A great choice of artwork to emphasize the poem.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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a raging funnel
sweeps dust
into his ears
with vile,
In addition to the criminal mind, this stanza is a perfect metaphor for schizophrenia.
A great choice of artwork to emphasize the poem.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for this very great five star review. I am humbled. God bless. Sorry for this late reply.
Comment from Jacob Collins
An excellent portrayal of the mind of a madman. You've clearly captured their mind well, the pictures certainly creepy which adds to the effect. I particular liked the last stanza which sums up everything you have said. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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An excellent portrayal of the mind of a madman. You've clearly captured their mind well, the pictures certainly creepy which adds to the effect. I particular liked the last stanza which sums up everything you have said. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for considering this an excellent portrayal of the criminal mind. I am honored. Sorry for this late reply.
Comment from livelylinda
nassus1957: brilliant writing. Original description of an evil criminal mind and how it works. You chose the perfect picture (trenty did a fantastic job with this pencil drawing)and the combination of your words and his picture make this six star worthy but will have to be virtual today. livelylinda
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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nassus1957: brilliant writing. Original description of an evil criminal mind and how it works. You chose the perfect picture (trenty did a fantastic job with this pencil drawing)and the combination of your words and his picture make this six star worthy but will have to be virtual today. livelylinda
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the virtual six stars my friend. That is more than enough. I am deeply humbled. Sorry for this late reply.
Comment from judiverse
A very dark but compelling look into the mind of a criminal. Excellent description of evil thoughts morphing and forming a dark image. This describes him as being out of control, listening to the voices that compel him to do evil. They do have such dark minds. judi
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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A very dark but compelling look into the mind of a criminal. Excellent description of evil thoughts morphing and forming a dark image. This describes him as being out of control, listening to the voices that compel him to do evil. They do have such dark minds. judi
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for this great and warm five star review. sorry for this late reply.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Eternal Muse
An excellent sketch of the workings of a cruminal mund. Brilliant words found to describe it. And what an awesome picture!
Loved these:
a raging funnel
sweeps dust
into his ears
with vile,
vexed voices
Excellent
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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An excellent sketch of the workings of a cruminal mund. Brilliant words found to describe it. And what an awesome picture!
Loved these:
a raging funnel
sweeps dust
into his ears
with vile,
vexed voices
Excellent
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks for considering this an excellent write and thanks too for pointing out what you like in the poem. I am honored, sorry for this late reply.
