Gabriel the Goat
There are always lessons to learn for everyone31 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Loanna,
This is a charming poem for kiddies and kids at heart. I love the way you wove the message into the story and the ending put a big smile on my face. Simply delightful!
Hugs,
Lou
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Hi Loanna,
This is a charming poem for kiddies and kids at heart. I love the way you wove the message into the story and the ending put a big smile on my face. Simply delightful!
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Bless him! What a lovely little story. Children will love this one, Loannalois. It is beautifully written, with a bouncy rhythm, and a lovely moral in the story. Excellent. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra
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Bless him! What a lovely little story. Children will love this one, Loannalois. It is beautifully written, with a bouncy rhythm, and a lovely moral in the story. Excellent. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
Comment from scd41
The poem flows smoothly to tell the story having a lesson for all. People tend to ingnore their own but are critical about weaknesses of others. It is a case of the pot calling the kettle black. Best of luck for the contest.
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The poem flows smoothly to tell the story having a lesson for all. People tend to ingnore their own but are critical about weaknesses of others. It is a case of the pot calling the kettle black. Best of luck for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
Comment from tfawcus
This is a story with one or two messages for the younger audience - for the older audience too, for that matter! We had a goat for a short while. A very short while! She was a terror. Our neighbour named her Vindy (short for Vindaloo - a warning of what she might become!). In fact we eventually found her a good home in a large flock. I guess she was just lonely!
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This is a story with one or two messages for the younger audience - for the older audience too, for that matter! We had a goat for a short while. A very short while! She was a terror. Our neighbour named her Vindy (short for Vindaloo - a warning of what she might become!). In fact we eventually found her a good home in a large flock. I guess she was just lonely!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahaha! G'day Loanna, that is a beautiful piece that flows very smoothly and I got a good laugh out of it. This is another great entry to a contest from you, good luck and cheers, Fez
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Hahahahaha! G'day Loanna, that is a beautiful piece that flows very smoothly and I got a good laugh out of it. This is another great entry to a contest from you, good luck and cheers, Fez
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed the story of the naughty goat Gabriel and its moral lesson. There's always a reason why people behaved the way they're behaving. It is not always healthy to jump at conclusions. I like the metaphor of the goat giving us insights into our own human foibles.
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I enjoyed the story of the naughty goat Gabriel and its moral lesson. There's always a reason why people behaved the way they're behaving. It is not always healthy to jump at conclusions. I like the metaphor of the goat giving us insights into our own human foibles.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Loanna,
What a fun story poem. A bit of a lesson in bullying and making friends.
Cute artwork. He does have that stubborn goat look about him. LOL
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
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Hi, Loanna,
What a fun story poem. A bit of a lesson in bullying and making friends.
Cute artwork. He does have that stubborn goat look about him. LOL
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
Comment from c_lucas
An ornery disposition can always lead to trouble. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
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An ornery disposition can always lead to trouble. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
Comment from Glasstruth
The lesson is never assume you know the answer. It's better to lhave an open mind to why someone wears or does what he does. A great story with an excellent moral. Nice rhyming too. Well crafted. Les
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The lesson is never assume you know the answer. It's better to lhave an open mind to why someone wears or does what he does. A great story with an excellent moral. Nice rhyming too. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
Comment from Cookie333
Boy can they jump. Hubby won't let me have one-he says they are 'dumb' but we both know they are very smart...This one had a great tempo that moved me along very well.
thanks for a great read-and a great lesson
karen
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Boy can they jump. Hubby won't let me have one-he says they are 'dumb' but we both know they are very smart...This one had a great tempo that moved me along very well.
thanks for a great read-and a great lesson
karen
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
