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Comment from Walu Feral
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Hahahahahaha! G'day John, you are such a character mate. I just sat down and got ready to read one of your stories and like some other things in my life, it was over so fast. LOL. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Oh yeah... Fez, awesome review my friend. John
Comment from tfawcus
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Ah,the wine! I'm not under the affluence of incohol as some thinkle peep I am. I'm not half as thunk as you might drink. I fool so feelish I don't know who is me, and the drunker I stand here, the longer I get. Oh, devil take that skein of yarn!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Awesome review. Reminds me of, I think it was Forrest Tucker?

    John
Comment from gypsycaravan
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What a sweetheart you were to help. An EMPTY bottle of wine and you'd never untangle it. Ha. Nice piece and photo. Anxious for the conclusion. Will it be the wine or the untangling?

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Woo-hoo-hoo...great way to end a great weekend. Thank you for a great review. John
Comment from Linda Engel
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Can only think of my own conclusions after reading this one twice. I take it the TV and basketball did not matter after two hours. Sweet and fun. What a good hubby to untangle such a mess. After the wine I assume you tangled yourselves up in another mess. What an opportunity. fun

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Woo-hoo I'll never tell...

    Thanks for reading and a GREAT review. John
Comment from IndianaIrish
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Good thing you don't have a cat who would have raveled up the tangled yarn even more. Your story shows that anything can be enjoyable when you have someone you love sharing a frustrating task and sharing a bottle of wine.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

It's not scane, John, it's skein.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Saved by the skein of my teeth. Thanks for the review. Glad you stopped by and enjoyed. John
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi,

An amusing tale you spin here. A good old yarn. You did well to knit it all together. I did laugh and almost got a stitch. I'll stop now!

The most I could manage in the days when I drank was attempting to fit the key in the lock - usually unsuccessfully!

Nice short anecdote with a lot of charm.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the review. Glad you stopped by and enjoyed. John
Comment from adewpearl
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scane of yarn - skein
excellent pairing of photo and words
good alliteration in totally tangled
you recreate the scene well and tell it with warm humor
Brooke

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Skein, thanks.

    Thanks for the review. Glad you stopped by and enjoyed. John
Comment from mfowler
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This is fun.
You describe a drunken state in which a totally unsuitable activity is undertaken. The result predictable.
You suggest it was the basketball game that distracted you from unravelling, but methinks the wine seems more likely.
A fun, tongue in cheek yarn. Good entertainment.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    Drunken state? Far from it.