Love is ...
No place I'd rather be38 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
I believe it. I hate untangling a skein of yarn. It drives me crazy, but I do not want to cut it like Gordion's Knot. This is a brief but well told piece of flash NON-fiction. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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I believe it. I hate untangling a skein of yarn. It drives me crazy, but I do not want to cut it like Gordion's Knot. This is a brief but well told piece of flash NON-fiction. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Thank you sis cat. I appreciate your stopping to read this. John
Comment from boxergirl
College basketball, your wife, a bottle of wine, and untangling a ball of yarn - I call that making memories and I bet you or your booty will not forget it for a long time. I can honestly say that most men I know would not do that for their wives - so kudos to you for "showing" your love for her. 8-)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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College basketball, your wife, a bottle of wine, and untangling a ball of yarn - I call that making memories and I bet you or your booty will not forget it for a long time. I can honestly say that most men I know would not do that for their wives - so kudos to you for "showing" your love for her. 8-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Thank you BG for those great words. I appreciate it. John
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Ah, now this is a subject I can identify with. My husband is often pressed into duty with tangled yarn. True love knows no boundaries, does it? LOL
Has it started snowing in your neck of the woods yet?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Ah, now this is a subject I can identify with. My husband is often pressed into duty with tangled yarn. True love knows no boundaries, does it? LOL
Has it started snowing in your neck of the woods yet?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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I think the "blizzard" and the 2ft snow predictions is about to fizzle out. Looks more like a six inch snow. That's good though. This 60 yr old body didn't really want to shovel 2ft of snow and ten FT drifts.
Oh, btw, thanks for reading this short little post. John
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Shoveling isn't fun at any age! LOL
Comment from barkingdog
I assume you meant that you'd be finishing the yarn project tomorrow, not the half bottle of wine which would go well with the rest of the basketball game. Damn, that was a long time sitting on the floor! Sore bum?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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I assume you meant that you'd be finishing the yarn project tomorrow, not the half bottle of wine which would go well with the rest of the basketball game. Damn, that was a long time sitting on the floor! Sore bum?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Ellen, how you be? Thanks for reading. No wine or yarn tonight. We're contending with a possible 12-36 inches snow blitzing blizzard. John
Comment from emrpoems
That is the best way to express love. Some persons say very loving things but their actions do not reflect what they say.
Show me you love me is what this poems says. and the spouses in fact show each other their love
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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That is the best way to express love. Some persons say very loving things but their actions do not reflect what they say.
Show me you love me is what this poems says. and the spouses in fact show each other their love
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Thank you much, emrpoems. Always great to hear from you. John
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL You are a hero, John! I bet your ahem, botty was a bit sore after all that, but I expect t
hat bottle of wine came somewhere near compensation!! Well done, for being a husband in a million! :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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LOL You are a hero, John! I bet your ahem, botty was a bit sore after all that, but I expect t
hat bottle of wine came somewhere near compensation!! Well done, for being a husband in a million! :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Hero? No. Just in love.
Thank you, Sandra. Awesome review. John
Comment from mauial
I like this short piece because you don't define what love is, instead you show what it is. Showing love is real and there is no better way to do it then by spending time with the one we love.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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I like this short piece because you don't define what love is, instead you show what it is. Showing love is real and there is no better way to do it then by spending time with the one we love.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Mauial, great words expressed in your review. Thank you . John
Comment from Gloria ....
Untangling a skein of yarn is the new jigsaw puzzle which is only a picture of a blue sky. I would consider that a College hoop for sure. Lots of meaning in your write. We could likely write an essay on it, so well done, John.
You're gonna need more wine though, beyond the half-bottle still remaining, because you've only partially untangled the wool.
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Untangling a skein of yarn is the new jigsaw puzzle which is only a picture of a blue sky. I would consider that a College hoop for sure. Lots of meaning in your write. We could likely write an essay on it, so well done, John.
You're gonna need more wine though, beyond the half-bottle still remaining, because you've only partially untangled the wool.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Wool? What wool!
Just kidding. Great review. Thank you.... John
Comment from Ulla
Well, well, well! that must be love!
I cannot really find any wrongs, but where do you want to go with this, if anywhere? I liked it though. Made me smile.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Well, well, well! that must be love!
I cannot really find any wrongs, but where do you want to go with this, if anywhere? I liked it though. Made me smile.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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I never usually follow-up with a second posting. It's like a second movie, Rocky 2, no good.
Thanks for a great review . Always appreciated. John
Comment from Spiritual Echo
All you would need to do is add a haiku and you'd have a perfect haibun.
Time flies when you're having fun or totally into the preoccupation. No one is here to check, but five hours later, I'm still attached to my laptop.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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All you would need to do is add a haiku and you'd have a perfect haibun.
Time flies when you're having fun or totally into the preoccupation. No one is here to check, but five hours later, I'm still attached to my laptop.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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It's not to short for a haibun if I were to add a haiku (not on this post)?
Thank you for reading. John
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You should try the style--it's fun and would fit into this post well. What I like about it is the relative shortness of prose, can be very low, but check it out on Google. It's usually around 100-200 words and can be filled with staccato style, fragmented sentences, completed with a haiku.
I thought of it immediately when I read your post.
