Love is ...
No place I'd rather be38 total reviews
Comment from Delahay
While very short this does manage to say quite a bit. A man who would spend the evening untangling a skein of yarn with his wife when he intended to watch basketball is a man in love.
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While very short this does manage to say quite a bit. A man who would spend the evening untangling a skein of yarn with his wife when he intended to watch basketball is a man in love.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
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Thank you Ward.
John
Comment from Zue65
Briefly said, you did came with complete story line, a good plot, the characters and a setting to present your general non-fiction definition of love. Nicely written with a twist of humor i your ending. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.
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Briefly said, you did came with complete story line, a good plot, the characters and a setting to present your general non-fiction definition of love. Nicely written with a twist of humor i your ending. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2015
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Thank you very much nassus. I appreciate the honesty in your review. John.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Yes, I know it takes time to get the tangles out. It's a slow process, but you get used to it. You did a good job writing a short story. I'm sure your wife enjoyed the time spent together on the floor. And the wine bottle half empty tells me why you decided to wait until tomorrow. LOL Drew
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Yes, I know it takes time to get the tangles out. It's a slow process, but you get used to it. You did a good job writing a short story. I'm sure your wife enjoyed the time spent together on the floor. And the wine bottle half empty tells me why you decided to wait until tomorrow. LOL Drew
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Hello again. Thank you for reading. John
Comment from c_lucas
Unwinding yarn us to be a challenge. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
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Unwinding yarn us to be a challenge. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Thank you, Charlie. I certainly appreciate your stopping by. John
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You're welcome, John. Charlie
Comment from lancellot
Yes, I have to agree with the theme of this short work. Most times a great example of love in its purest form, is the little quiet moments spent doing the mundane. Well said.
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Yes, I have to agree with the theme of this short work. Most times a great example of love in its purest form, is the little quiet moments spent doing the mundane. Well said.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Thank you, lancellot, for an honest review. I appreciate it. John
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
That's what marriage is mostly about, isn't it, John? Just being together doing simple things, talking, staying close for a hug, laughing at the tangles life gives us. Very sweet story, actually. :)
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That's what marriage is mostly about, isn't it, John? Just being together doing simple things, talking, staying close for a hug, laughing at the tangles life gives us. Very sweet story, actually. :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
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Just being together and sharing the little things along with the big.
Thanks for reading. John
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, John,
What a sweetheart you are.
My hubby would do the same for me, and interestingly enough, he would have NO problem at all with a glass of wine and basketball to get him through it. LOL
Cute little story. Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
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Hi, John,
What a sweetheart you are.
My hubby would do the same for me, and interestingly enough, he would have NO problem at all with a glass of wine and basketball to get him through it. LOL
Cute little story. Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Awe, thank you. I'd do it all over. Actually there is that other half....
Thank, Jax.
John
Comment from MelB
Now that is love! What a nice thing to do to help your wife. The wine and basketball would have definitely made it go faster.
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Now that is love! What a nice thing to do to help your wife. The wine and basketball would have definitely made it go faster.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Thank you, MelB.
John
Comment from scd41
Who says males are unfit to do some jobs like untangling skein of yarn? He or she (I suppose more of she) would change his or her impression after reading your post. Of course, you had a headstart of having your beloved by your side and a bottle of wine. Then two hours would appear as just ten minutes.
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Who says males are unfit to do some jobs like untangling skein of yarn? He or she (I suppose more of she) would change his or her impression after reading your post. Of course, you had a headstart of having your beloved by your side and a bottle of wine. Then two hours would appear as just ten minutes.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
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Thank you, scd41. Always appreciated. John
Comment from Ashar001
It is in the small things, that we find it, isn't it? Those experiences that really matter and are of importance to us.
Beautiful!
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It is in the small things, that we find it, isn't it? Those experiences that really matter and are of importance to us.
Beautiful!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
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Love doesn't know big or small events.
Thank you for reading and shsring.
