Comment from MusingsOfMWH

Exceptional

Shock therapy for Boz--um--Blake, wow, you could have fun with that part alone. I know I would certainly get a charge out of it. Such consequences would serve the corrupt liar right.

He should have just made up a new identity for himself once he saw what Blaze had done to his appearance. As Blake the senator, he's messed up ten ways to sundown. As just some disturbed guy with orange hair, he can simply fall through the cracks and he'll save himself lots of grief.

As for Blaze going forward with that meeting with her boss, from how you've shown her characteristics to this point, I'm sure she'll land on her feet, so to speak.

No matter what, I'm sure it will be interesting, because you're an exceptional writer.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015

Thanks a million for the sixer and for the wonderful comments. I'm really grateful you have decided to read the story. :)

Comment from elgone

Excellent

Maybe throw in something that he had burnt fingertips so they couldn't check his prints. Perhaps add in something that he tried to grab Blaze or the Camera and and severely burned his fingers. Routine would be to check his prints on a John Doe.

E

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015

Thanks, Elgon. Well, his hands were all blistered from the camera. But you raise a good point, and Blaze could have changed them easily with the camera. I will go back and add that to the main file. I'm glad you thought of it. You are SUCH a huge help. :)

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

I wonder if the Senitor's family will ever find him and will they believe it is him if they do. Blaze really had it in for him after he rejected her but it is sort of her fault because she encouraged the relationship. I enjoyed the read and look forward to reading the next post. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thank you so much. :)

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

The author pegged this write on the nose. I stayed the course thinking this is true , but not sure. Sounds like the whole bunch could use shock treatments. Well done author.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks so much, Ben, for stopping to have a look at the book. Blaze is a demon from Hell, as you can see. She will mellow after a certain thing happens to her up on Earth. This is the third in a trilogy about demons in Hell and a magic camera they use. A drama with a stupid, bad-tempered Devil for comic relief.

reply by Ben Colder on 27-Jan-2015

I understand. I am not into this sort of route so forgive my ignorance. I saw Megan and was wondering.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Oh, you thought it might be a post about something in the news. I see. Sorry. :)

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Wow she really messed with Blake's life. He'll
never get out of this mess...and poor
Lorna thought she had found true love.
The dialogue between the Doctors lets the
reader know just how bad things are for Blake.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks, Nancy. Blaze is still very much a demon, but something will happen in her life soon that will soften her, just as Ginger changed with she fell in love with Gary. When this mystery thing happens, Blaze will begin to question her values and one day reconsider her extreme treatment of Sebastian. And he will have learned a lesson when he returns to face his crime of framing Clay.

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Phyllis your very wicked. Blaze has more of the devil inside her than Ginger ever had. I know the Senator is a rat - not sure why Lucifer would be dismayed although his non presence in the election would anger him. Maybe I am blaming Blaze too much. She did dispose of someone who would damage the electorate.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks, Alan. If you had read the first book (Snapshots), you would have seen the terror that Ginger was once. Blaze is a demon, so of course she acts like one. That all changed for Ginger when she fell in love with Gary. What will it take for Blaze to soften? Oh, she will... would be no fun without a happy ending. But when and why is my secret. :)

reply by Alan K Pease on 27-Jan-2015

I did read Snapshots but missed the early part.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Oh, sorry. I didn't realize that. Then you did see Ginger in action, fighting Willie in the alley. Maybe you missed her drawing a gun on three of the camera owners, and actually firing at one, missing, then kicking him in the head. She was mostly in the background till the final chapter, but when you saw her, she was always a dangerous bitch. Blaze is nice to people, trying to fit in, so seeing HER act like a demon may be more shocking, I guess.

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

I just noticed the Nasdaq is up 5.11, so not too bad. What's that you say? Senator Blake is missing too!

LOL, a vagrant damaging a mailbox. Sounds about right for a senator, getting the dirt on his opponents.

Ah, that little Blaze is a tricky chicky. Smart. Oh my goodness and there is the Hellevator back.

This is terrific, Phyllis! I think it would make for some excellent daytime TV or maybe even a series. I love it!

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks a million for the sixer, Gloria. Yes, it's a soap opera all right. But will Hell sell to bored housewives? Hmmm... :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Blake is back where he belongs! Yeah, I can imagine his shock when he looked in the mirror. I'd probably be drooling in a loony bin too if it were me. But he had it coming. I have a feeling Luke will find out, tho. He's probably going to flip out and make her return him to normal. But will she? I can't wait to find out.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks so much, Cindy. Luke has no way to know Blake is now a little clown man in a mental hospital. Blaze just went to tell him that his favorite senator has gone missing, so he won't think to blame her. :)

reply by Cindy Warren on 27-Jan-2015

nobody's going to check what the camera has been doing? I was expecting her to get caught and Luke to practically burst into flame he'd be so mad.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

She did take a chance, but, as she said earlier, they stopped spot checking the pictures long ago when they all got bored. They are supposed to, but they don't, and she knows that. :)

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Another showstopper of a chapter, Phyllis. I was having a little trouble with the first exchange with Lorna, but finally got the gist of it.

I think it odd that he would even insist he was Senator Blake. I think he did snap!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks so much, Jay. Odd? He IS the senator, so what would you expect him to say? He's telling the truth. But of course Blaze knew no one would believe him. :)

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

What's going to happen to Blaze when Luke learns that things did not pan out as he planned? Blaze is to caught up in her revenge glory to think clearly.
These blizzard events are put in place with such accuracy . The dialogue is well written with realistic expectations . I cannot wait for the next chapter. It's going to be explosive .

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks so much, Muffins. Blaze is smarter than Luke, but his temper is wild, so she'll have to be very careful. :)