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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from Cajungirl
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Another fabulous chapter. When the DNA test results came back a match to Blake, those Doctors will be surprised. How will Lorna be able to save him, now?

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
    Thank you yet again. They won't do a DNA test. They said it's a waste of time since they can SEE that he's not the senator. Tests costs money, anyway.
Comment from lancellot
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Very good chapter. Although fiction, some may scoff at the second place candidate getting the Senate seat. Most people know it doesn't work that way. Perhaps have the Governor appoint him to be fair. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
    Thank you. I thought that "fact" would be wrong and hoped that someone would set me straight. You're the first to mention it, tho. And you don't seem sure how it would be handled either. It's one of those things that would take a while to learn by searching the web, so I hope someone knows what DOES happen, or are all states different? Well, I'll get the answer before publishing it. :)
reply by lancellot on 31-Jan-2015
    Oh, I know how. It's written in most state's constitution. A person would be appointed by the Governor.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
    Oh, then that's what I'll say. THANK YOU! :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
    I have made the change. Thanks again. I hope I have a reviewer vote left... will try. :)
Comment from GracieAnn
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Phyllis, so ironic that the psyc doctors think he's a wacko while all the while, he's telling the truth. Electro shock will likely not help matters. The plot thickens. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much. Yes, that IS a switch, isn't it? Poor Sebastian. LOL!
Comment from Fridayauthor
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It sure worked out the way blaze planed, at least so far. Somehow, I have a hunch it might not go all so smoothly.

Good writing making the posting easy to read.

Thanks!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much. :)
Comment from marijmd
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Well hell has no fury like a woman scorned INDEED! When she gets pissed WATCH OUT. As much a Lorna was a cold bitch - I do feel a bit sorry for her.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
    Thanks so much, Maria. You've got Blaze's number. She is just angry at being dumped. The punishment is much too extreme, but he's stuck with it... for now. :)
Comment from Curly Girly
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Blake has disappeared, and there is a confused man in hospital. Nobody seems to recognise him as he is now. But I have a feeling that things are about to change.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
    Thanks so much, Nicole. Things will change, but not till later. Blaze needs to soften up, and that can only happen when... well, when something happens. :)
Comment from rmj09
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The focus Sebastian. The storyline development Lorna calls Blaze to let her know she and Sebastian are to be wed. Blaze congratulates her as if it's the first she heard about it, or Sebastian missing. Blaze watches the news and police reports, after a couple of days it appears the police arrested a man destroying a mailbox. He finds himself back as a psych patient. Saying he is Sebastian and a demon made him look as he does. Blaze is going to tell Lucifer.
The dialogue is clear and helps us understand the characters better. The narrative show actions Blaze taking the Hellevator.
The hook will Lucifer believe Blaze?
Keep on writing.

Phyllis have a great weekend, walk in the shadow of God. *o* Rita

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much, Rita. Let's hope Luke believes her or she's toast. :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Well, Phyllis, I would say the mission was accomplished. Great detail about his fall and how the media picked up the story. Too bad this can't happen in real life. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
    Thanks, Lou. It should, but the media was bought off long ago. :(
Comment from ravenblack
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It just struck me how different Blaze is from Ginger. Ginger' s fury- there was always something comical too it. Blaze- not so. Her fury is cold. Do you think she can use that camera on Rick Perry? Great Photoshop with the graphic!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
    LOL! Rick Perry doesn't need the camera treatment. He's already a loser. :)

    Thanks a bunch, Ed. Glad you liked the graphic... took me a while to size and paste in all those bags. :)

    Blaze is a demon, so she can get really nasty when she's crossed. Ginger, in the first book, held a gun on three people and shot at one, missing him, then kicked him in the head as he lay on the floor. She was no sweetheart either at first. :)
reply by ravenblack on 28-Jan-2015
    Two felony charges pending, and the idiot still claims he is going to run. Didn't Perry embarrass himself enough the last time?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
    He totally fell apart last time in the debates. He won't make it very far.
Comment from seaglass
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Hmmm, she won that one. Will be looking forward to Luke's reaction. He may make he run for office to make up for it.
Wonder what will become of Lorna.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much, Carolyn. Lorna will be very sad, of course. But recall that it was her idea to frame Clay for a crime and he would go to jail if it were not for Blaze getting that confession. Lorna is as corrupt as Sebastian.
reply by seaglass on 29-Jan-2015
    Will she disappear and move on or will he still find a place in the story?
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015
    I don't know yet. If she shows up, it will be near the end. I THINK. :)