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Street Work

Cop saving souls

4 total reviews 
Comment from honeytree
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a life to have within our world today
To have to live like this must be a horrible way
to survive. Maybe if as a world with so many wanting
love , food and comfort instead of abusing them
lets look after them.

honeytree





?dno

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

Comment from Jay Squires
Excellent
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I had to read it my usual 5 times, but at least I'm not setting this aside as unconquerable.

I have a feel for the gist. Pimp tangling with white knight father, killing pimp, keeping daughter off the street and the cop knows justice has already been served.

How'm I doin'?

And is this a common theme, Walt? I read about it before, but with some liquor thrown in.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
    I sent you a long winded report, but the system dumped it, just think police blotter, fighting for above the fold, parade, twist of human.. Always thank you for visiting, problem these days, way to common, too many dads have to fight their way out of drug dens, life has too little value, expectations of the better life, not having to work for....later my friend.. Walt
    PS presumptuous of me
Comment from Dr. Nad
Excellent
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"Street Work" is a very transparent, informative and humble acknowledgement of what I have heard from others but not experienced myself. The writer is moving forward and we all are invited to look with a more isolated view at a cop and his family that invites greater mental scrutiny. Loss is difficult for all of us but we will survive. May God Bless You. Happy Valentines Day

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

Comment from c_lucas
Excellent
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Runaways do not know the meaning of Hell until they hit the streets. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015