Comment from Poetofheart2013

Excellent

A very beautiful and moving poem with lots good imaging in it.
you words are full of life. and excitement .
And everything flows together so well.
Keep the good work.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

Your song is beautiful, Roy!

It has a lovely flow. Your abcb rhyming is perfect, and you've used wonderful imagery with your well chosen words. You've also used fine alliteration with beyond and beauty, beyond and bounty, and storm and see. Your second stanza (verse) is my favorite:

'beyond creation's bounty
beyond the storm tossed sea,
outside of space and distance
reigns hope in majesty."

Well done, my friend. Have a great day! Alana

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Alana, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

reply by acerisestory on 24-Jan-2015

You are welcome, Roy!

Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

This is a great song you have written. Do you play an instrument when you put these together and sing too? They come out so good.
Thanks for putting a song in my day, I appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Debbie, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy. I play guitar, a little keyboard.

Comment from janalma

Excellent

Beautiful words to this song. And tho I think God and the universe are one, this does not destroy that thought. Very nicely written, no awkwardness or backward syntax to make something fit and rhyme. Good job.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from us2bdowe

Excellent

I'm glad you found your way here also. This is a gentle poem with strong words. The rhyming is evident but reads effortlessly. I truly enjoyed this poem.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Excellent

This is a very good song. I wish I had musical talent to hear it properly done. My dear late mother taught piano and played the French horn. The best I can do musically is play the radio. Also, I appreciate the notes and mention of the Jewish feel to it. That gives me perspective of a sort.
This is worthy of the highest rating I have available. Great work. Bruce.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Bruce, , for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from kriver

Excellent

Hi Roy, I like this it has a smooth feel to it. I would like to hear how it sounds too.
I bet it is a neat song too.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks,for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from mauial

Excellent

This does read like one of the Psalms. Nicely done. Too bad though that some men, supposedly blessed with intelligence, are blind to the fact that "every house has a builder."

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

So beautiful this deserves six stars if I had any left. The rhyme and flow in this are lovely. You really give it a lyrical feeling. God's power and majesty are presented so powerfully. You show it as extending beyond the boundaries of man's knowledge. A power and wisdom that know no bounds. Excellent expression. judi

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Your approval is enough Judi. Thanks, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

This is such a strong poem, it shouts out so many majestic and powerful sentiments. I think it is a beautiful song, I admire the rhyme scheme. Excellent in my opinion.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Dawny,for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.