Comment from makril0075

Good

Loved your work

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

I have no idea what you're talking about? Are you talking about the poem? Why the four, you don't Mark it down for not liking it, it needs technical problems, tell me what they are! Thanks I think! Roy.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a powerful song of praise and wonder, Roy, acknowledging the universal and infinite range of God's dominion. I can imagine it being a most stirring song when set to music.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Tony, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from mumsyone

Exceptional

Excellent Bible-based lyrics! I can really appreciate this because I write inspirational songs too, some of which are in my portfolio. I love to see truth in a song rather than a lot of "fluff."

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Lois, for this most outstanding review, comments, and empathetic words, I only filter in one every so often, although in my songwriting days, I wrote a lot, bless you Lois, I'll have to fan you, to have a look, blessings, Roy.

Comment from giraffmang

Exceptional

Roy, I have to tell you that I am not a big fan of religious poetry but what was that.

The imagery was superb, the writing crisp and expressive. good strong word choices, amazingly powerful message.

I keep sixes until the end of the week for things such as this.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thank you for your impartial judgement and gracious words, it does my heart good to hear quality words such as yours, thank you so much for great review, and the generous stars, blessings, Roy.

Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

What a nice thought...But to me everything involves nature...we live because of nature..Everything comes from the Soil we call earth...so your song makes since in lots of ways....Nicely done...

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks for these lovely words and great review, blessings Roy.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A very spiritual and devout song/ poem.
The song/poem flows with a smooth cadence and the meaning is expressed with clarity and focus.
The scripture choice is well suited to the song's/poem's content and
the presentation well done.
A virtual six.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Shirley, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Roy, why do you always put your best poems on when we are all out of sixes! This is a beautiful song/poem my friend, it flows like a dream but it's strength is in that powerful rhythm, and I don't have a six!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Your support is enough Eric, I'm out of them as well, when I'm out, the best ones come along, but thank you, you are a faithful supporter and a good bloke, blessings, my friend, Roy.

reply by Eric1 on 24-Jan-2015

So are you Roy!

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015

Thanks Eric

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Very thought provoking abcb poem about the power and wisdom of God. It shows he rules nature.

It has a very biblical feel to it. If by being inspired by the Old Testament gives it a Jewish feel, it also gives it a Christian feel.

Good choice of artwork.

Keep writing.

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks DP, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.

reply by dragonpoet on 25-Jan-2015

Any time, Roy,

Joan

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

great use of enjambment to create flow of thought from line to line
solid use of abcb rhyming
effective listing of the beyond phrases
I love the dramatic visual of God's hurling lightning's arrows
This sounds fantastic read aloud - have you set it to music?
a wonderful message with great imagery - I would give this a six if I had any left :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Brooke, I'm out too, but I'll take this lovely review and wonderfully upbeat comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent photo that complements your poem very well. Twice you used a nice chorus. It is about lightning, thunder and a touch religious. Thanks for sharing and thanks for the foot note.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015

Thanks Robin, for this most upbeat and positive review, and complimentary comments, blessings, Roy.