Comment from honeytree

Exceptional

Really amazing art work for these words.
God has a very special place out there somewhere
His power and love and giving to us all is very precious.
He loves all He has created all life.

honeytree

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks Annie, for these amazing comments, great review, and wonderful stars, blessings, Roy.

reply by honeytree on 27-Jan-2015

Loved what you wrote Roy

Annie

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thank you Annie,

reply by honeytree on 28-Jan-2015

Loved what you wrote.

Annie

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Beautifully written as usual reverend!, This has a lovely flow in ABCB rhyme scheme
Seriously your ability to write gospel rhyme is amazing Roy thanks for sharing this poem with all of your fanstory congregation

dip

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks Dip for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Exceptional

A beautiful, accurate, & very well written lyrical poem, & a joy to read & to tune along with in the mind's melodies. It's great that you have gotten out of that Poetry Closet & now give your talents, art, & skills to an ever needy world!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks for this amazing review, comments, and beautiful stars, blessings, Roy.

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 27-Jan-2015

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Comment from Diny

Good

Okay I wanted to give you five because I loved this song.... the way it felt the subject and theme- then- you went and put in (1st chorus) and then (2nd Chorus) and the reader dosnot know what either of them are... as a musician and a poet you need to refrence what chorus one is or include it and again with #2...
You do not have music with this so the lyrics have to stand alone.

Like I said love this theme and sentiment-- just needs to all be there not just aluded to.


write on
Diny

member since 2004

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks for the kind review, but I have no idea of what you're talking about, and it does have music, blessings, Roy.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Roy, this is a wonderful song and praise to God. I love this line: He hurls the lightning's arrows on clouds...
~~~Teresa~~~

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thanks Teresa, for this great review and perceptive comments, and kind words, I appreciate them. Blessings, Roy.

Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

Good song writing. You may not know that there is a category for song lyrics in the poem section. Very good, do you have the song over in Fanmusic? I belong there as a paying member. I'll look if you have the song posted. I'd love to hear it.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thanks for great review and comments, I'm not a paying member of "fan music" I will get around to it sometime, blessings, Roy

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Roy, this is wonderfully written. I sang it to myself. (with my own melody, of course.) It has a great message to it and I sure enjoyed reading it. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thanks Miss Sally, for this great review and perceptive comments, and kind words, I appreciate them. Blessings, Roy.

Comment from Alan K Pease

Exceptional

You have chosen your words carefully to describe the glory of God and his moods to carry a message that He is always there. I always count the seconds between flash and thunder to see where He is right then - perhaps Zeus at times. Excellent rhyme, rhythm, and message. The photos reveal prophecy - they match the poem so well.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thanks Alan, for the astuteness and openness you display, in awarding this great review, perceptive comments and stars, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Brabazon

Excellent

The means to heaven's gate is most beautiful and eternal and there is universal power over all the things that exist

This seems like an AB-AC song format.

Prior to envisioning this lyric, the mind must have exercised unlimited openness and concentration, at the same time.

The poem is of remarkable sublimity.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thanks, for this great review and perceptive comments, and kind words, I appreciate them. Blessings, Roy.

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

I really enjoyed this so much! Your words flowed so wonderful with a beautiful rhyme. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing ... you definitely have a true talent.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thank you so much for the very generous, magnanimous and complimentary review, comments and stars, blessings, Roy.