BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Don't Cross a Demon"Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am a little disappointed in Blaze. I thought she was a lot more original than this. Oh well, lets see where it takes her. It could take her lots of places.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
I am a little disappointed in Blaze. I thought she was a lot more original than this. Oh well, lets see where it takes her. It could take her lots of places.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Barbara. Blaze is testing him. She doesn't believe him for a second, but she wants to see what he'll try. :)
Comment from seaglass
oooh! how scary is that. I'm not so sure all women that snag rich and famous men then go to the press, might not be in this sorority. Wonder what might happen if Sebastian stole the camera.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
oooh! how scary is that. I'm not so sure all women that snag rich and famous men then go to the press, might not be in this sorority. Wonder what might happen if Sebastian stole the camera.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks for reading, Carolyn. How did you guess what he's going to do? He's in for a surprise. Blaze is testing him, and she doesn't think he's sincere, but she wants to have some fun watchig him try to outwit her... next chapter. :)
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I figured for him to use hook and crook to get as far as he has, he can't be broken that easily...at least without a fight.
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL, that what happens when we get to screwing around with demons, or at least that's what I figure. Thanks for another fun chapter of boink the demon. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
LOL, that what happens when we get to screwing around with demons, or at least that's what I figure. Thanks for another fun chapter of boink the demon. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Ric. Blaze is testing him... and her camera is ready to protect her, just in case. It can read her mind and will do her bidding as long as it's close by.
Comment from Curly Girly
Mmm... that was quite a good punishment. It will leave his career in ruins. She doesn't need sex, so I'm not sure why she is back in bed waiting for him. Looking forward to the next chapter so that I can see the development.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
Mmm... that was quite a good punishment. It will leave his career in ruins. She doesn't need sex, so I'm not sure why she is back in bed waiting for him. Looking forward to the next chapter so that I can see the development.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Nicole. Sure, she needs sex. She's a demon. Hell is filled with sex. She just doesn't want it with Luke, but she craves Sebastian's bod. She says he's the best she's ever had and doesn't want to give that up. She may have to tho if he fails her test. :)
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Lol, if you say so. Personally, I don't think there will be anything good in hell - definitely no sex! No friendship, no love, no kindness, no fun, nothing positive. There will be worms, heat, fire, discomfort, mental and physical torture, hate, gnashing of teeth and finally death.
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You're talking about real Hell. The Hell in this series of books is very different, and the Devil Lucifer is stupid, a real jerk. I'm just having fun making fun of him, since I have no fear of the Devil and neither should you. He's powerless unless you want to listen to his ideas. So, I make him out to be stupid. I tihnk he must have been to rebel against God in the first place. :)
Comment from MizKat
Wow, Phyllis,
You've written a very good chapter. It was fun to learn about all the pictures Blaze was taking. I wonder if Sebastian is really going to stay with her now. How will he tell Lorna he decided to stay with Blaze afterall?
Kat
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
Wow, Phyllis,
You've written a very good chapter. It was fun to learn about all the pictures Blaze was taking. I wonder if Sebastian is really going to stay with her now. How will he tell Lorna he decided to stay with Blaze afterall?
Kat
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Kat. We'll find out what happens in the next chapter. :)
Comment from royowen
Well, the functions of a camera from hell, how useful would that be, does it have definite controls you know, press this one to freeze the victim, this one to write a confession, or does it work by thought process, osmosis perhaps? I loved this episode, it has swung from where I thought it would swing, now she's behaving like a demon, but I must say, Sebastion deserves it, well done, Phyllis, enjoyable, you know how to captivate a reader, very imaginative, took me by surprise, that's thinking outside the box, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
Well, the functions of a camera from hell, how useful would that be, does it have definite controls you know, press this one to freeze the victim, this one to write a confession, or does it work by thought process, osmosis perhaps? I loved this episode, it has swung from where I thought it would swing, now she's behaving like a demon, but I must say, Sebastion deserves it, well done, Phyllis, enjoyable, you know how to captivate a reader, very imaginative, took me by surprise, that's thinking outside the box, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much, Roy. The camera reads the user's mind. :)
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Ah,ha
Comment from adewpearl
Love Sebastian's reaction to Blaze's vindictive actions with the camera and her pissed off revelations
I love her forcing him to confess all the while taunting him
She is so wonderfully manipulative and he sounds like a little weasel with all his begging LOL
Brooke
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
Love Sebastian's reaction to Blaze's vindictive actions with the camera and her pissed off revelations
I love her forcing him to confess all the while taunting him
She is so wonderfully manipulative and he sounds like a little weasel with all his begging LOL
Brooke
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Brooke. Now, she is testing him. Will he pass? Or will he try something stupid? :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
Oh, oh! What is in that little demon brain of hers now? My imagination can even fathom it. I wouldn't care to be friends with her. Your writing is very good, Phyllis and interesting, of course. Very original topic, I would think. Drew xx
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
Oh, oh! What is in that little demon brain of hers now? My imagination can even fathom it. I wouldn't care to be friends with her. Your writing is very good, Phyllis and interesting, of course. Very original topic, I would think. Drew xx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thank you, Drew. I like to try new things, but I never thought I'd end up writing three books about demons with magic cameras. This ALL came from a short story I posted a few years ago about a man given a strange camera. Fans insisted I write more about it, so I did. Now I spend half my time in Hell. LOL! Blaze will be going there soon to report to Lucifer, btw. :)
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So glad it's just fantasy about spending your time in hell. It wouldn't be my choice for sure. LOL
Comment from emrpoems
never knew the camera could act on its own. Well that was a good way to pay him back but I would not want him again . after knowing that hew was willing to go to Lorna I could not be with him
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
never knew the camera could act on its own. Well that was a good way to pay him back but I would not want him again . after knowing that hew was willing to go to Lorna I could not be with him
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much, Erica. I don't know if Blaze wants him but she sure doesn't trust him. She's setting up a test. Think he'll pass? LOL! The camera doesn't work on its own--it reads its owners mind and does what he/she asks.
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Could you arrange for me to get one of those cameras? LOL
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Get on the waiting list. Only 41,504 people ahead of you. :)
Comment from gypsycaravan
Oh, what a demon she is. Right. I forgot. She really IS a demon. Good chapter and dialogue, Phyllis. Is she just playing him now or really giving him another chance to get what she wants? Hammy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
Oh, what a demon she is. Right. I forgot. She really IS a demon. Good chapter and dialogue, Phyllis. Is she just playing him now or really giving him another chance to get what she wants? Hammy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much, Hammy. She is currently testing him. I don't think she believes he will dump Lorna and come back to her, but she wants to see what he does. :)
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Love that, hammy, bit. I wrote Hmmmm and auto correct took over. LOL
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LOL! Here I thought you signed your name Hammy. I figured it was an odd nickname, but I wasn't about to question it. THink I'll call you Hammy from now on. LOL!
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Well, I guess it would fit. I do tend to ham it up a bit. Ha.
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Which is why you're writing, like your life, is such fun. :)