BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Don't Cross a Demon"Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
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Comment from Cajungirl
Seb, put on what I believe to be a great act, but I for one don't blame him. Blaze isn't easily fooled. Let us just hope Seb is not up to something, for his sake. Fantastic chapter.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Seb, put on what I believe to be a great act, but I for one don't blame him. Blaze isn't easily fooled. Let us just hope Seb is not up to something, for his sake. Fantastic chapter.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Thanks again. YOu sure dipped way back into the heap. I did that today with another novel and liked reading much better that way. :)
Comment from rmj09
The focus is the camera. The storyline development Blaze is using the camera on Sebastian and has told him she is a demon. She makes him write a confession. Then he pleads for a second chance. She plays with him and sends him to the shower. Hides the confession and sets the camera.
The dialogue is clear and gives use a mental picture of what they are doing. The narrative shows action Blaze hiding the confession and the placement of the camera.
The hook will the camera do as Blaze asks or will Sebastian try to use it on Blaze?
The emotion I felt questionable as to who is playing whom.
...After a (Drop few) minute or two, she nodded slowly.
Keep on writing.
Phyllis, it is a bright sunny day and 29 out. I have 33 r/r's to do today I fell behind. Have a great week. In friendship, walk in the shadow of God. *o* Rita
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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The focus is the camera. The storyline development Blaze is using the camera on Sebastian and has told him she is a demon. She makes him write a confession. Then he pleads for a second chance. She plays with him and sends him to the shower. Hides the confession and sets the camera.
The dialogue is clear and gives use a mental picture of what they are doing. The narrative shows action Blaze hiding the confession and the placement of the camera.
The hook will the camera do as Blaze asks or will Sebastian try to use it on Blaze?
The emotion I felt questionable as to who is playing whom.
...After a (Drop few) minute or two, she nodded slowly.
Keep on writing.
Phyllis, it is a bright sunny day and 29 out. I have 33 r/r's to do today I fell behind. Have a great week. In friendship, walk in the shadow of God. *o* Rita
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Rita. I have removed the extra word ... was left from an edit, apparently. And you are the ONLY one to notice! Thanks again. :)
Comment from Fridayauthor
Very good chapter with lots of tension and intrigue. She seems to have the situation well in hand but teases us to read on to find out what is next.
Great chapter!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Very good chapter with lots of tension and intrigue. She seems to have the situation well in hand but teases us to read on to find out what is next.
Great chapter!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Ohhhh, so much fun to read. She IS a demon(ess). Good plot and dialogue. Poor Seb--he's in deep trouble. Your chapter moves along nicely to progress story line. Original and interesting.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Ohhhh, so much fun to read. She IS a demon(ess). Good plot and dialogue. Poor Seb--he's in deep trouble. Your chapter moves along nicely to progress story line. Original and interesting.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed it. Seb won't, tho. LOL!
Comment from GracieAnn
Phyllis, whoah. She's acting like a demon would, I guess the politician has been out-politicked. LOL. Great cliff-hanger at the end. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Phyllis, whoah. She's acting like a demon would, I guess the politician has been out-politicked. LOL. Great cliff-hanger at the end. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Thanks for reading all this today. Looks like you're getting all caught up. I do appreciate it. :)
Comment from marijmd
Oh Blaze - tsk tsk tsk - was he really worth it? She could do better than to stay with a man who is only with her because she terrifies him - how like Lucifer she is here.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Oh Blaze - tsk tsk tsk - was he really worth it? She could do better than to stay with a man who is only with her because she terrifies him - how like Lucifer she is here.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much for the six stars, Maria. Just wait till the next chapter. Blaze doesn't believe him, so she's going to test him. Will he pass? :)
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Thank you so very much for the six stars, Maria. Just wait till the next chapter. Blaze doesn't believe him, so she's going to test him. Will he pass? :)
Comment from Spitfire
Ooh, glad I go right into the next chapter after my TV break. Luke should have no doubt she's on his side. Good show of S's fear. Lions on the wall. LOL I'd be terrified too. Even through all this, he can still get a hard-on. Men are sure slaves to their handy bathroom gadget. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Ooh, glad I go right into the next chapter after my TV break. Luke should have no doubt she's on his side. Good show of S's fear. Lions on the wall. LOL I'd be terrified too. Even through all this, he can still get a hard-on. Men are sure slaves to their handy bathroom gadget. :-)
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Shari. Yep, Seb is ALWAYS ready for a good time. He'd probably get it up a half hour before his execution. "Instead of a last meal, could I have a last screw with a hot babe?"
Comment from judiverse
Blaze really has power of the camera she can use if she desires. Asking Blaze to take his picture--not a great idea. Blaze illustrates what the camera can do with the wallpaper. She also threatens to make him write a confession that he framed Senator Clay and plans to become a missionary to atone. Blaze then decides to give Sebastian a second chance, but she has the camera nearby, just in case. Blaze and Sebastian seem all ready to make up. This moves quickly and really draws the reader in. Enjoyed it. judi
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Blaze really has power of the camera she can use if she desires. Asking Blaze to take his picture--not a great idea. Blaze illustrates what the camera can do with the wallpaper. She also threatens to make him write a confession that he framed Senator Clay and plans to become a missionary to atone. Blaze then decides to give Sebastian a second chance, but she has the camera nearby, just in case. Blaze and Sebastian seem all ready to make up. This moves quickly and really draws the reader in. Enjoyed it. judi
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Thanks so much, Judi. Too bad he's such a lying politician. :)
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You're welcome. Blaze realize she has a lot of power, and uses it. judi
Comment from Sasha
You do a great job reminding us that Blaze is a demon. She is definitely not someone I would ever want to cross. At some point Luke has to find out what she is doing and I wonder what he will have to say about it.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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You do a great job reminding us that Blaze is a demon. She is definitely not someone I would ever want to cross. At some point Luke has to find out what she is doing and I wonder what he will have to say about it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Sasha. She'll be reporting to Luke in chapter 45. We'll see how it goes. :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
Wow! This is a deliciously evil chapter, Phyllis. What makes it enjoyable is that Sebastian is such a low down character and it's natural to want to see him suffer.
Oh, Lord, the ridiculous things that came out of his mouth in an effort to control Blaze. Calling her baby made me wince. The stupid slob. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Wow! This is a deliciously evil chapter, Phyllis. What makes it enjoyable is that Sebastian is such a low down character and it's natural to want to see him suffer.
Oh, Lord, the ridiculous things that came out of his mouth in an effort to control Blaze. Calling her baby made me wince. The stupid slob. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Thanks so very much for the six stars, Lou. I'm glad you liked it. And you caught the "baby" crap, I see. Just wait till you see what she does to him next. Shows what a demon is capable of if crossed...not for the faint of heart. :)
