Returning A Valentine's Favor
An Epic Poem14 total reviews
Comment from pipersfancy
Wasn't there a recent prompt about "Inside the head of Dean Kuch"? I'm thinking there should be another one... "Inside Mikey's Mind..." Only you could come up with such a terrific girl-ridicules-boy-then-boy-overdoes-retribution tale...!
Good luck with this contest - and remember... I've NEVER said ANYTHING even remotely unflattering about you!!!
Christina
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Wasn't there a recent prompt about "Inside the head of Dean Kuch"? I'm thinking there should be another one... "Inside Mikey's Mind..." Only you could come up with such a terrific girl-ridicules-boy-then-boy-overdoes-retribution tale...!
Good luck with this contest - and remember... I've NEVER said ANYTHING even remotely unflattering about you!!!
Christina
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Yes. That prompt comes out in a few days. Still a few spots left. I don't even know what's in Mikey's mind, so I don't know if anyone else could figure it out. :) You wrote a poem that made me cry, have a pretty voice and play the bagpipes. You have a lifetime pass. :)) mikey
Comment from amada
This is a very creative work. What a great story of revenge, sweet sweet revenge. I have seeing with my own eyes girls use men "cause you're the kind of witch who flaunts!" Best wishes.
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This is a very creative work. What a great story of revenge, sweet sweet revenge. I have seeing with my own eyes girls use men "cause you're the kind of witch who flaunts!" Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of "Returning A Valentine's Favor". I do think you actually did get the ultimate revenge! This sounds like a love life gone bad! Ha. Great little story within a poem for a Valentine's Day. Do they make greeting cards with this theme. They Should! Smiles and more smiles. Carole
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To the author of "Returning A Valentine's Favor". I do think you actually did get the ultimate revenge! This sounds like a love life gone bad! Ha. Great little story within a poem for a Valentine's Day. Do they make greeting cards with this theme. They Should! Smiles and more smiles. Carole
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from l.raven
OMG what a story told....I guess you got your revenge...or will...what a Valentines this will be...very well described...and very well written...luff Linda xxoo
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OMG what a story told....I guess you got your revenge...or will...what a Valentines this will be...very well described...and very well written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from Dr. Nad
I enjoyed your Valentines contest entry. One of the things I would say about it is that it is very Romantic and fun. From the beginning into the middle and on through the end. Valentines is a subject that is familiar to all of us and one we shouldn't ignore. We have all those good Valentines memories even if they take us back to elementary school. May God bless You. Happy Valentines Day.
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I enjoyed your Valentines contest entry. One of the things I would say about it is that it is very Romantic and fun. From the beginning into the middle and on through the end. Valentines is a subject that is familiar to all of us and one we shouldn't ignore. We have all those good Valentines memories even if they take us back to elementary school. May God bless You. Happy Valentines Day.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from LIJ Red
Ah, the pig's revenge. Watch her rot, drawing endless flies? She can stay but them buzzing boys need to go. Haven't seen anything with Colin yet-Irish, ain't he?
Okay, review will save now. Excellent.
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Ah, the pig's revenge. Watch her rot, drawing endless flies? She can stay but them buzzing boys need to go. Haven't seen anything with Colin yet-Irish, ain't he?
Okay, review will save now. Excellent.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
This is a mad scream to say the least. So well written. Side splitting fantasy of revenge perfectly over the top. I know many will relate. Hands down winner!!!
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This is a mad scream to say the least. So well written. Side splitting fantasy of revenge perfectly over the top. I know many will relate. Hands down winner!!!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from Neonewman
Well, I certainly wish I had a sixer for this brilliantly crafted piece. I am going to have to go and vote if it's not to late. Good luck in the voting my friend. I will write paybacks honey under my vote.
God bless!
Steve
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Well, I certainly wish I had a sixer for this brilliantly crafted piece. I am going to have to go and vote if it's not to late. Good luck in the voting my friend. I will write paybacks honey under my vote.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from K. Lorraine
This was a great payback letter written in the form of a Valentine Day car. Hurt pride, broken heart and so true of how the pretty girl most always overlooks the advances of the class nerd. This entry is a definite contender. Wouldn't it be real cruel to actually find a Hallmark card such as this one? Excellent....
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This was a great payback letter written in the form of a Valentine Day car. Hurt pride, broken heart and so true of how the pretty girl most always overlooks the advances of the class nerd. This entry is a definite contender. Wouldn't it be real cruel to actually find a Hallmark card such as this one? Excellent....
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
Comment from adewpearl
Life is like a box of uneaten chocolates - I think I need to take a break so I can have several minutes of uninterrupted laughing - that is one of the best similes I've read in years - thank you so much on behalf of those who don't have a warm and fuzzy love life history - and to all those cheating rat bastards out there who have thrown our chocolates onto the scorching sidewalk, damn you! LOL
I remember last year's speech - add the comma for direct address
good assonance in state my case
now be gone, loser - add comma for direct address
happy valentine's day, girl - add comma
this is so full of truly clever, laugh-inducing lines - I'm sorry I don't have a six for you, but I'm sure you'll get others, my friend :-) Brooke
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Life is like a box of uneaten chocolates - I think I need to take a break so I can have several minutes of uninterrupted laughing - that is one of the best similes I've read in years - thank you so much on behalf of those who don't have a warm and fuzzy love life history - and to all those cheating rat bastards out there who have thrown our chocolates onto the scorching sidewalk, damn you! LOL
I remember last year's speech - add the comma for direct address
good assonance in state my case
now be gone, loser - add comma for direct address
happy valentine's day, girl - add comma
this is so full of truly clever, laugh-inducing lines - I'm sorry I don't have a six for you, but I'm sure you'll get others, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
