Comment from Ricky1024

Exceptional

"Great piece darling as always.''
"It's good to read stuff that matches my abilities." {Few can!}
"Imagery was tantamount as was Adjective and Objective Content."
Tell me your thoughts on the same subject based on my book "Blue Moon."
Ricky1024.
"Blue Moon"
By Ricky1024.
1/26/2015.
10:02AM
10:05 AM Est.

"Blue is as blue does as the "Goddess of the moon, Luna glows below."
Young lovers notice the colour so,"
"Honey why does the moon glow blue?'
"Perhaps it is sad as it has been plummeted in the past?"
"Or perhaps being all alone, true love has past?"
"But whatever the colour represents, you can be sure being blue it has
lost it's romance...

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015

Thanks again, Ricky. You're the best! Elaine

Comment from Connie C

Excellent

Oh, I really like this. There is a lot of activity here in so few lines with the bear "chomping and savoring" and the moon laughing. I like how you personalize the moon and stars. Very nice! Wish I had a sixer to give this.
Connie

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015

Thanks for such an encouraging and wonderful review. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Nice free verse. Lines short yet very descriptive. All intertwined in the story of the bear and the night existing together yet part of the whole. Nicely done

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015

Thanks for a lovely review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'm sure the bear could find a lot of things to eat going through the trash. That makes them willing to come close to people's neighborhoods to see what goodies they can find. The moon makes it a happy night. It lights the way for the bear. The moon laughing is an interesting visual image, and the stars chime in. It makes for a lovely night, and everyone's happy. Great creation of a happy mood. judi

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

The crescent moon has a special charm even more appealing in my mind than a full moon. Nice poem easy to read with a nice flow. Blessings, Patricia

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from musicismygetaway

Exceptional

I enjoyed this poem a lot. I smiled reading it. I adore the way it tells a short story. I love the way this poem is written! I most definitely give it six stars:) Keep up the amazing work!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015

I am honored, thanks so much for your generous amount of stars and encouraging words. Elaine