Comment from K. Lorraine

Excellent

I'm stymied for words. This piece was brilliant. It was beautifully written with the finest spiritual touches. A perfect example of a masterful contest entry satisfying the prompt. This poetic piece is a definite contender. Good luck!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015

Thank you for such kind and positive feedback.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Beautiful expression of faith and our soul. We indeed are more than footprints in the sand, that are washed away by the tide, we are put here for a purpose and God is wanting us to fulfill His purpose for our lives. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Patricia

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015

Thank you for the elevating encouragement.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Interesting that you chose to classify this under general fiction and then give a spiritual / religious rendering. Was that intentional?

Well written and thoughtful piece. Is the 5-7-5 also original?

GMG

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015

Thank you for the elevating encouragement. Yes, I wrote the 5-7-5 too - it seemed like a good closing.

reply by giraffmang on 23-Jan-2015

It was a great closing. A very nice touch

good luck