Chasin' Rainbows
Somewhere over the rainbow...6 total reviews
Comment from K. Lorraine
A very nice story within a poem. I really liked the way you used 'somewhere over the rainbow' in your descriptive sentence. The rhyme flowed nicely from verse to verse and the stories flow was natural and almost unrehearsed. This poetic piece was a worthy entry to the contest. Thank you for sharing your talents....
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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A very nice story within a poem. I really liked the way you used 'somewhere over the rainbow' in your descriptive sentence. The rhyme flowed nicely from verse to verse and the stories flow was natural and almost unrehearsed. This poetic piece was a worthy entry to the contest. Thank you for sharing your talents....
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated
Comment from kellyolsen
You did a beautiful job on this poem. It is sophisticated and expertly written; you obviously put a lot of time into this - finding the most appropriate rhyming words (I love jungle/fungal). A tale of a long harrowing journey to find the gold, risking life and limb. It's a life less we all need to learn, that sometimes some things are worth risking everything for. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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You did a beautiful job on this poem. It is sophisticated and expertly written; you obviously put a lot of time into this - finding the most appropriate rhyming words (I love jungle/fungal). A tale of a long harrowing journey to find the gold, risking life and limb. It's a life less we all need to learn, that sometimes some things are worth risking everything for. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for the review and your thoughts on it. it is very much appreciated
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent story/poem. You added excitement and suspense to your words. It rhymes well and flows along nicely. Very fresh and original!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Excellent story/poem. You added excitement and suspense to your words. It rhymes well and flows along nicely. Very fresh and original!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for your thought on it. Much appreciated
Comment from thunderrumble
Nice imagery here. It flows well and has an olde tyme vibe to it. It's the mark of good work for me when the settings and characters pull me into the poem or story and I was right there behind the Captain, cutlass in hand.
Very vivid and enjoyable. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Nice imagery here. It flows well and has an olde tyme vibe to it. It's the mark of good work for me when the settings and characters pull me into the poem or story and I was right there behind the Captain, cutlass in hand.
Very vivid and enjoyable. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for the review. I wanted it a bit different for this one. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of "Somewhere over the rainbow... "Chasin' Rainbows" Are there really seven shades in the rainbow? If pots of gold were real, I'd have about as much chance of finding one as I would have to win the lottery!! Nice work. Carole
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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To the author of "Somewhere over the rainbow... "Chasin' Rainbows" Are there really seven shades in the rainbow? If pots of gold were real, I'd have about as much chance of finding one as I would have to win the lottery!! Nice work. Carole
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Nice story with the adventure at sea with pirated trying to find the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Always an interesting read.
Well penned. It was a fun read.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Hi,
Nice story with the adventure at sea with pirated trying to find the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Always an interesting read.
Well penned. It was a fun read.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Many thanks Jax. Much appreciated
