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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from Cajungirl
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Blaze better come up with something quick. She certainly don't want to be taken from her job on earth, she loves it too much. Great Chapter.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
    Thanks again. She's come to her senses halfway, at least. She's still confident Luke won't find out about her affair with a human.
Comment from lancellot
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Another good chapter. I think some more of your personal politics are being transferred to Blaze. It is a tough thing. I went to a bad school too, but I learned. Nice finish.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much. I guess I put my beliefs into every book I write. I think I'm not alone in that. :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Blaze is really struggling trying to fit into this new role. You did a great job explaining that struggle. I am wondering which side will win. I am hoping the good side.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
    Thanks, Barbara. The good side always wins in my books, but it will take a while. :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Blaze has had a talk with herself, but that's not what's she's feeling, is it? Seems to me she's pretty confused. What could be more human than that?

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
    Thanks so much, Cindy. Yes, she was confused. Almost forgot about Luke. She got too wrapped up in the human world for a while. Not again. :)
Comment from Muffins
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Blaze finally got the kick in the rump needle to hop back on the Luke gravy train. Her dealings with Sebastim, the girls her human boss, and Ginger is causing a battle inside her. All of the came to a head in the bathroom. Her self talk is the type anyone finding themselves off their path would say.

The dialogue is informative,and the sexual romps are juicy. Blaze is an intense character who is full of surprises with every chapter.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much, MUffins. In the next three chapters, she'll show her true demonic side. Poor Sebastian. :)
Comment from michaelcahill
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WOW. That was major angst and tension followed by major fun to be. She has a real battle going on within here. The cost seems high if she continues to follow her instincts. She seems to follow them quite readily too. On for more! mikey

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Mikey. :)
Comment from Curly Girly
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Another well-written chapter which ends with a sexy romp in the shower. She has changed her mind again, regarding the bill. I am sure she might wish to change it again!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thanks, Nicole. Sebastian helped her to come to her senses. She no longer needs the bill, since she took care of the twins' problem. And she doesn't dare go against Luke, who was the one that bribed the senator to kill the bill. :)
Comment from judiverse
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Blaze realizes she would be in trouble with Luke if she convinces Sebastian to change his vote. She tries to justify her change of thinking by telling him about the girls and the school they had to attend. Luke certainly would favor poor schools, as they would turn out poorly educated voters. He's being proven right all the time. Blaze distracts with the idea of a shower. Her comment about never having been a child is great, and so true in her case. She also thinks about working so hard at acting like a human that she's forgotten her obligations to Luke. He won't let her forget, though. judi

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thanks, Judi. Blaze is confident she can handle Luke. She's going to have to report to him about the senator he just bought off. :)
reply by judiverse on 24-Jan-2015
    Hi, Phyllis. Blaze has a lot to handle.
Comment from Fridayauthor
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I guess she really had to change her mind once she realized the consequences of her proposed actions. I'm interested where you're going with the twins.

Well written once again! Nice chapter.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much. The twins will bring Blaze back to life after what she's about to go thru. :)
Comment from boxergirl
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Blaze tries to stay mad at Blake but realizes she cannot afford to upset Luke. So now everyone is happy again. At least until the hot water runs out. 8-)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    LOL! Well, tomorrow the water is ice cold, as you will see. :)