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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from Cajungirl
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Tara and Blaze's friendship seem to have survived Heaven and hell. Tara should wonder what Blaze have in mind for her young friends. Fantastic chapter.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
    Thank you for reading those chapters today, Vergie. Much appreciated. :)
Comment from Curly Girly
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Scheming women. Ginger, now know as Tara, hates being called Ginger. Blaze is plotting something.... I'll have to read more to find out.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thanks so much, Nicole. She's a schemer, but not here. She is really glad that her old friend has come around and is willing to be friends again, even tho Fr. Murphy and Franny advised Tara against it.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
    Nicole, I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from Muffins
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    Their talk displays the friendship both woman wish they could act upon openly.Also, Blaze is acting more human than demon and likes it. Her boldness is positive. The only downside is if Luke finds out and is not happy with the results.

     Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


    reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
      Thanks, MUffins. True, she has to consider what Luke will think. He supports teh senator because he's corrupt and does what Luke wants done. Blaze has to disconnect herself from Sebastian so Lucifer never finds out. :)
    reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
      I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from marijmd
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      Oh she put herself at risk in getting the girls set up - It is nice to see Tara care - I wonder if no good deed will go unpunished in this instance?

       Comment Written 22-Jan-2015


      reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
        Thanks so much, Maria. Blaze is a bit confused. :)
      reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
        I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from lancellot
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        Very interesting. Yes, Tara is acting like a friend, a very nosey one, but she may be right. It's about leaving breadcrumbs and Blaze is. Nice chapter.

         Comment Written 22-Jan-2015


        reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
          Thanks for the insightful comments. :)
        reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
          I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from seaglass
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          Cool interaction. Tata recognizes a hint of goodness that Blaze doesn't even realize she has. It's probably a dumb question, but what is Krugerands?

           Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


          reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
            Thanks, Carolyn. A Krugerand is a popular South African coin for investors. It's one-ounce of solid gold. The US makes the American Eagle, and other countries have their own gold coins. It's the main way people buy gold to save against inflation. :)
          reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
            I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from Cindy Warren
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            Isn't it weird how the best days can turn into the worst nights? Even if you hadn't given me so many hints, I'd know Blaze wasn't going to have a good time with Blake tonight. And I don't think Blaze is acting like a demon.

             Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


            reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
              Thank you so much for reading, CIndy. Everyone seems to think that Blaze has turned into a child-loving kind person overnight. LOL! She DOES care about those kids, but just a little and she doesn't know it yet. She mostly cares about doing her job well. She is so wrapped up in her job for Theo and Tara, that she almost forgot who her real boss is and why she is on Earth in the first place.
            reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
              I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, Comment from Drew Delaney
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              Great chapter, Phyllis. Well written and your keeping up with the suspense as to what is next coming up, so that is good. Keep the readers wanting more. I hope all is well and going good for you. Keep up the great writing. Drew xx

               Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


              reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
                Thank you much, Drew. And thanks for asking how things are. I went to my doctor today and he said I do NOT have a throat or chest infection now. So that's good news. He gave me something to heal the sore tissues which are raw from coughing last week. :)
              reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
                I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review, CLICK HERE.
Comment from elgone
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Take a look at this sentence.

Blaze aligned the stapler and pens on her desk, as if it needed tidying up. - I'm no expert on grammar but It just struck me as odd. At first I thought 'it' should be 'they' in the second clause, referring back to stapler and pens. 'It' is meant to refer to desk but the way the sentence is constructed it doesn't seem to work that way. I could be wrong, the 'it' refers back to the most recent noun, perhaps, but since that is the object of a preposition and not the direct object of the sentence...well, it bothered me.

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
    THanks. I meant tidying up the DESK. That's the expression. At least around here. So IT does refer back to DESK. :)
Comment from ravenblack
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Just when I though Blaze was turning into a softie, you throw that last line in. It makes me wonder what sly plans she has and just how she plans on exploiting Ginger/Tara.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much, Ed. Blaze wouldn't do anything to hurt Tara. She's her only friend, and she missed her when Tara said she couldn't see her anymore. Evidently Tara saw somehing in Blaze that Blaze doesn't even see. She guesses that the girls "got to" Blaze, so maybe there is hope to pull her away from the wrong path, even tho she fully deserves to be in Hell, unlike Ginger/Tara.