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Hearts!

A simple fact.

8 total reviews 
Comment from Dustybones
Exceptional
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Good for a 2-4-2 writing prompt entry. I see your point, or at least think I do, and understand that in a relationship, any sort, we must be honest, admitting our wrongs to make the love we have for each other both true and real.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
    Thank you for the wonderful review, comments and amazing stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Drew Delaney
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Well written, but short. Just kidding.

These short ones are difficult to review because you need about forty words before it is allowed.

The theme of Love is a good one. Especially at this time of year. Valentine's Day is approaching. Drew

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
    Thanks Drew, for this encouraging review, and yes I owe my wife a poem for V day.
Comment from daeneam
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Hearts know
love's confession
hearts glow.

I like the little rhyme between know/glow and I admire how you come up with the very little poem required in the prompt.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks For this really great review and lovely comments I appreciate them so much,
Comment from jessyjamespoems
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A nice job! An excellent subject to choose to write on! True facts were used and well placed! The rhyming words held together and gave life to (loves confession) with the words chosen to write this-they told a whole story with only 4 words! very well put together and gives easy imagination to the reader! THANK YOU for sharing this!!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks For this really great review and lovely comments I appreciate them so much,
reply by jessyjamespoems on 20-Jan-2015
    Thank you for sharing this! I have read other work like your's but got nothing from it but words, your's jumped out an told many stories and left room to the reader to add their own ,I really liked that about your work! THANK YOU-It was my pleasure to discover your work!!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Yeah, and it does a lot for the expressions on our faces, too, LOL!

No one knows what is in your heart better than you yourself do. Good 2-4-2 entry for the contest. I wish you the very best of luck.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks For this really great review and lovely comments I appreciate them so much,
reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Jan-2015
    Not a problem, I am very glad to do so. :}
Comment from alf collier
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Hi. I thought this was real sweet. It's a truth in simple words, and simply stated. Hard subject to broach in so few words, but you did it well, alf

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks For this really great review and lovely comments I appreciate them so much,
Comment from adewpearl
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Your poem is in excellent 2/4/2 syllable count for the contest
I like the optional rhyming of know and glow
good use of enjambment to create flow of thought from line to line
your poem has strong emotional appeal
Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks Brooke,mFor this really great review and lovely comments I appreciate them so much,
Comment from mermaids
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This poem has few words but says much. Hearts glow gives the reader a warm feeling. Your lines connect to each other and show the impact of love. You did well with creating a poem with so few syllables.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks You for this great review and comments,