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Comment from Ricky1024
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GREAT!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great!GHREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Hey Ricky...-smile- well thank you Bro....this is another one of my stellar performances gone on recognized, but by the few who understand and appreciate the craft....Bug the big love!
Comment from Joan E.
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Your animated hummingbird looks so real, it could fly off the screen into my living room. (Am I the only one having trouble seeing your text, even when I bring up the brightness fully?) I liked the comparison to a "helicopter" and the "pas de deux". More hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    No...you're not. It's a conspiracy I believe....I've brought the matter to the attention of captain Kirk on several occasions now...but I've a sneaking suspicion that Klingons have infiltrated the starship Enterprise....I'm sorry. There's nothing more I can do, give them my love...Bug
reply by Joan E. on 19-Jan-2015
    Thanks for your good efforts--I guess Tom and his minions have bigger problems to attend to--I'll just keep squinting harder! Best wishes- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    obviously...my back hurts Joan, been carrying this place for three years now...let em' tie somebody else to the whipping post...-wink-...over and out...Bug-
reply by Joan E. on 19-Jan-2015
    Rest your back--it's someone else's turn to carry the load! Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    LOL..........very funny.
Comment from daeneam
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5:01 AM

Good morning, dearest one...
Every time I see birds, I am reminded of God's great love to us. He take care of every little creatures and teach them to worry not for the next day. So much so, He loves us mostly.
Lovelots, c", Mae

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    Hey Mae...-smile-...well birds of the Same feather tend to stick together...take for instance the prehistoric Tiradactals we have here...content on feeding on the same old offspring and breeding extinction. go figure the fishing's great...-wink- bug love michael
Comment from jlsavell
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Michael,

It doesn't matter what I say, I would simply be inept at describing the beauty if this work. I am always, always in awe of how you construct your work. A beautiful mind which relays what he perceives in which no one can match. The song is beautiful but not as beautiful as your words or your mind.. exceptional...

much respect and love..

Jimi

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    ahh don't worry about it...awe inspires worship wouldn't you know it...? and I have way too many groupies now...please just place homage in the bowl by the door...I'll look at it later. love you Michael
Comment from robina1978
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A lovely moving picture of a hummingbird that complements your poem ever so well. Then an other nice free verse with a lot of alliteration and all about the hummingbird

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    Hi Sis....-smile-..yep...yes maam that about sums it up...bug love michael
Comment from Jomarch
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I found the animation distracting. I wanted the poem to move me and create images in my mind. It flowed well in parts. The language used was pretty and discriptive. Well Done

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2015
    -headtilt-...is that right. well, let me ask you something did I twist your arm and make you stare at the hummingbird...-headshake-...nope. alright, I'll be expecting a lil more from you in the future...I will leave you to your thoughts now with these words of wisdom...stoic...like a concrete clown, a pylon takes pride in gray....good day to you sir...bug love-
Comment from l.raven
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HI Michael, so beautiful is your hummingbird...crown of red upon his head...nectar dancing right pas de deux into soulful meaning of heartbeat...always your words unique to you...I love the video...heard it a few times...and I keep going back and looking at the hummingbird...you know I love it...
waiting for tomorrow...I know it will be ok...I believe that... talk with God last night...love your poem you...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2015
    hi...Linda, I'm praying hard and long. Whatever happens I always love you. If its bad news will deal with it...your not alone. I hate that they make you wait like that, its not right. Let me know as soon as you can. ...-smile- love Michael
reply by l.raven on 18-Jan-2015
    just happened to fall on the weekend...it's driving Kristy crazy too...she keeps calling to see how I feel...I keep telling her I feel fine...that is why I don't think it is cancer ...thank you Michael...yes we will...the appt. is at 3:00 pm...will call as soon as I get out of his office...please don't worry...I know it will be ok...I have faith in God...Joanna wanted to go with me for this visit too....but she has to wait for the kids after school...love you back...smiling...Linda
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2015
    it will be okay....-smile- you should have your Son take you...your already stressed...it'll be okay...
reply by l.raven on 18-Jan-2015
    I'm ok really...if I could stop shaking my foot...no really Michael...I was worried last night...but it's better tonight...I feel more positive about it tonight...it's just the waiting...I just want him to confirm what I already convvensed myself of...makes me nerves...love