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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 91 "When all is said and done"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from NurseBarb
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The words are fine alone. Beautiful and inspirational words. Reminding us to follow the path that the Lords has designed for us. Yes, sometimes pride gets in the way and we think we can handle a situation only to make a mess of things. It is so much easier to just ask for guidance in the beginning, but we're stubborn. A great reminder, Carolyn. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Hi NurseBarb, I'm glad you got the meaning in the poem... I appreciate the thoughts you shared. ;-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
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I don't think a lack of artwork affects this at all. This has deep truth to it...God always knows best, and is just waiting for us to say...'I'm listening.' Wonderful!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
    You always lift me up in your reviews and awesome rating. Thank you so much Irish Rain. I'm honored that yoyo liked 'When all is said and done.'
    :-) Carolyn
reply by Irish Rain on 21-Jan-2015
    Truly beautiful...THANK YOU for sharing this!
Comment from Deniz22
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Well said...and as someone else said, God allows U turns. Life is short for sure so there's a bit of a caution in your writing here to not miss out on the good things God has planned for His own.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
    I like that God allows U-turns. Your fine comments are encouraging . Thank you, Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
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I think the message in your poem is good enough to stand alone without any picture. Very nice writing, Carolyn. Life does go by fast and the older you get the faster it goes! :>D MIss Sally

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the affirming comments Miss Sally, :-) Carolyn
Comment from GracieAnn
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Carolyn, I believe that sometimes we depend to heavily on the peripheral and entertaining side shows with our writting. I think our words should stand alone, so no worries. You have crafted a strong and meaningful poem, my friend. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks GracieAnn for his affirming review. :-)
    Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn, you are so right...some times we go the wrong way...but God is always there to show us the way back...I love your poem...and it more that holds it's own without a picture...so very true...and so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thank you my dear Linda, Love you, Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 20-Jan-2015
    you are allllllways so welcome Carolyn...smiling...love ya back...luff
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Carolyn,

Your poems are very nice even without pictures to go with them.
Your message isn't lessened by not having them although I,
for one, really love to see photos with poetry. You can be sure
I will read your work even if it stands alone.

Kat

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks Kat, when I get back to my other computer I will consider both ways. I am so glad you continue to read my work. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This poem is presented perfectly well and you have done a great job with this piece of work. Life is indeed short. I turned 45 yesterday and I am starting to feel like every bit of it.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thank you Tom for your fine comments. Yes life is very short.
    Congrats on your 45th birthday. Love, Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 20-Jan-2015
    Thank you.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Carolyn,

We're such creatures of habit when it comes to having our comforts and tools at hand, but this turned out nice without artwork.

True and beautiful message in you work. Amen.

Happy Travels...

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    I like what you said Jax, thanks, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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The presentation of this poem does not need illustrating, your words are strong enough. It's a lovely poem with excellent sentiments. We all need God's help regardless of what we say. Without His help we are lost. Beautiful my friend. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    We do need His helping hand at all times.. Thank you Sandra for your insightful comments. :-) Carolyn