Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

I don't know French, but I do get the general feeling of the poem- confusion and disgust, signals going haywire as we spin spin spin. Simeon said calls to mind Simon says- too many game players out there.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015

I don't either...but boy when French chicks talk , I listen intently...-headshake-...well...it was a memory shopping ...you now being made to go...and ah ...watching....pissed off at first....but....well....ya know as circle's go....so do the days of our lives my friend....lol...ahhh hell I just listened to the song...and let go....wah-la. well, see you tomorrow afternoon....bug love michael

Comment from catch22

Excellent

Hi Michael! I like this poem about your frustration with people who play games--whether in love or life. I like the use of repetition of pas de deux. It also sounds very rhythmic. Nicely penned.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015

Hi Doc...-smile- ah not really just listened to the song...this showed up...I think it ah pretty much attests to any shopping trip...if I had mittens , I'm sure they'd be pinned to my sleeve...-wink- ahh haha good to see you Lady...bug love Michael

reply by catch22 on 16-Jan-2015

Ahh I see. Thanks for the info. Happy new year.