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Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Shut heart."Mostly romance.
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Comment from Jeanie
This is a very good poem. I have never been able to write poetry well. I think it is because there are so many different types of poems with different rules and i get confused. lol. Anyway, this poem is great!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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This is a very good poem. I have never been able to write poetry well. I think it is because there are so many different types of poems with different rules and i get confused. lol. Anyway, this poem is great!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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Thank you so much my friend, I write free verse, just try you may be surprised. I did some editing.
Comment from samsaysagain
Exceptional. This is a beautiful piece that overflows with love and strong recogniton of others in need of understanding. It offers an end to feelings of emptiness and reaches out to the lonely. I can feel those hurtinng ones being wrapped up tightly in blankets of hope.
Marvelous. I end this wanting more to read. Thank you for this beautiful work of art.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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Exceptional. This is a beautiful piece that overflows with love and strong recogniton of others in need of understanding. It offers an end to feelings of emptiness and reaches out to the lonely. I can feel those hurtinng ones being wrapped up tightly in blankets of hope.
Marvelous. I end this wanting more to read. Thank you for this beautiful work of art.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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Wow , thank you so much samssong for such generous review and stars, I did some editing , hope still alright LOL.
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Your entirely welcome. It's great!
Thanks for thr reply.
Comment from Victorian Lady
I like how you captured the way a person keeps all their pain and hurt inside, and to find healing, they need to open up to find peace. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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I like how you captured the way a person keeps all their pain and hurt inside, and to find healing, they need to open up to find peace. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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I did some editing, thank you so much my friend for a good comment.
Comment from sengwriter
It's really a thought provoking poem for me. I was terribly down with Malaria. So I'm down.
This poem sounds so natural for me to provide strength. I admire your imageries and imaginations too.
There must be always someone, deeply down. This poem is an inspiring support for them.
Wonderful.
Gautam
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It's really a thought provoking poem for me. I was terribly down with Malaria. So I'm down.
This poem sounds so natural for me to provide strength. I admire your imageries and imaginations too.
There must be always someone, deeply down. This poem is an inspiring support for them.
Wonderful.
Gautam
Comment Written 30-Sep-2005
Comment from amaranthblue
So beautifully and compassionately written... I loved the feelings you stirred with your words... Such a bright and tender heart you have, even in your fictional writing... So very inspirational my friend...
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So beautifully and compassionately written... I loved the feelings you stirred with your words... Such a bright and tender heart you have, even in your fictional writing... So very inspirational my friend...
Comment Written 29-Sep-2005
Comment from jkhudson
This is indeed an excellent poem that can be to anyone...husband, wife, daughter son, lover friend. It would make a great thinking of you in times of struggles card. I do so enjoy your work. Are you puting these into a book?
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This is indeed an excellent poem that can be to anyone...husband, wife, daughter son, lover friend. It would make a great thinking of you in times of struggles card. I do so enjoy your work. Are you puting these into a book?
Comment Written 28-Sep-2005
Comment from Green Peg
Hello Pili, As usual you have the gall to spin out this
awesome write your pen must surly run on magic jucie
to please my reading ooh you do have your way with me
Peace
Green Peg
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Hello Pili, As usual you have the gall to spin out this
awesome write your pen must surly run on magic jucie
to please my reading ooh you do have your way with me
Peace
Green Peg
Comment Written 28-Sep-2005
Comment from Kingsland
most people think what they are reading is about the author
but like you most of what I write is not about me
but about life
thank you for sharing anoher very well written piece of poetry ... John
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most people think what they are reading is about the author
but like you most of what I write is not about me
but about life
thank you for sharing anoher very well written piece of poetry ... John
Comment Written 27-Sep-2005
Comment from Shipper
OH WOW...THAT was absolutely PERFECT (in my humble opinion)..excellently written, hard-hitting, a beautiful, poetic way to ask someone to 'open up' to you, not keep their heart so tightly shut. Very gently soothing and inspirational. Thanks so much for writing and beautiful picture how do you post pictures like that?
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OH WOW...THAT was absolutely PERFECT (in my humble opinion)..excellently written, hard-hitting, a beautiful, poetic way to ask someone to 'open up' to you, not keep their heart so tightly shut. Very gently soothing and inspirational. Thanks so much for writing and beautiful picture how do you post pictures like that?
Comment Written 27-Sep-2005
Comment from J. Grubbs
The first and last stanzas were definitely my favorites. I found this poem to be very descriptive and creative. It was also well written and well thought out. The first stanza reminded me of a saying. "Misery loves company". And I have found that to be true in life as well as in poetry. Thank you for sharing your work with me.
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The first and last stanzas were definitely my favorites. I found this poem to be very descriptive and creative. It was also well written and well thought out. The first stanza reminded me of a saying. "Misery loves company". And I have found that to be true in life as well as in poetry. Thank you for sharing your work with me.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2005
