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Comment from michaelcahill
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I love the personal touch of this. It is a personal thing isn't it. It is how we personally relate and what we do as an individual, that's how I take it. Beautiful. Makes me want to shout! mikey

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    yes Sir....that's correct...a personal thing. When one is disrespected enough, oft times offense is taken. Alright brother good luck with the Luby's crowd...I'm going to eat elsewhere. Bug love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
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As usual, I enjoyed all your references, like "go tell it on mountain tops" and your play on "son shine". Your exuberance is palpable. Many cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    well thank you J...exuberance is a muscle I exercise regularly...Herculean always at the ready does my motivational engine run...on jet fuel Joan...bug love Michael
reply by Joan E. on 19-Jan-2015
    Keep exercising your exuberance and letting it rub off on us! Smiles- Joan
Comment from daeneam
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Praise be to God! The heavens rejoice when another Christian is born. It is a great feeling knowing God and all His beautiful plans for us. May God send you the angels to watch over you, radiate that gift of life to others and keep you safe in His loving arms. Much love, Mae c",

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2015
    I'm not talking about wanting to please an excited expectation of others....whom have performed similar ceremony ...in some make believe world they alone own. ..but a one on One, all by yourself but for...the love of God. the gathering is to worship him...and serve others with His Promise....and Character.....all the other stuff is bullshit...bank on it. -wink- love you Lady michael
Comment from adewpearl
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typo - humble solider - soldier
good use of alliteration
I like the play on words with sunshine/Son shine
I also like the exuberant/celebratory tone in you faith poem - sounds like lyrics
Brooke

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2015
    Hi no.One....thank you Great Lady....always my pleasure to see you come around...love you michael
Comment from damodarboruah
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Such a great subject on 'Christian' is really praiseworthy.

So refine and pinpoint words that one can fall into introspection.

Lines:
sings my son
soul surrendered
for the love of God's..

are really appealing the hear like me.

Why it captivates me much?For my daughter's name Glory is there and even I composed one poem too.

It's a wonderful job.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
    Hi...well then she can have it...I dedicate it to her, in the glory of God. thank you very much for enjoying my testimony...big love Michael
reply by damodarboruah on 14-Jan-2015
    Thank you,Michael.Pray more to read,though I m not regular.
Comment from mbagby23
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Though Jesus Christ we are born again. For he died for our sins so we can be free. Shed his blood and rose. Lovely poem.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
    Amen...and the Son shines on every man ...good or evil comes forth his fruit, skin examined unmarred or bruised. thank you...-smile- big love Michael
Comment from angelface2
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Wow, the picture captured my eye right away. What a lovely Christian poem of Jesus and His love for us. Go tell it on the mountain. I love.. soul surrendered for God's glory. Very nice, Mike

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
    Why thank you maam...very pleased you enjoyed....big love Michael
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Michael, you tell them...you are a born Christian...go tell it on the mountain tops, life begins forever...very spiritual poem...and your picture sets the stage...love the video...wonderfully expressed...well written...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
    If I align myself with anyone thing...meaningful...it would be Jesus and the love of God....its what I know...believe real deep soul meaningful...Glory...glory hallelujah. love you Michael
reply by l.raven on 12-Jan-2015
    I know...remember I know you...not even a WOOOOOoooooOOO ???? love you too!!!
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Michael,

What a beautiful poem you've written. I really enjoyed the read and all you had
to say in it. You've done a great job in telling us about Jesus and how great He
is. Thanks so much for sharing the work of art.

Mom

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
    Hi Mom...-smile-...sorry I haven't been around. I think this is the last one I'll write for a while. I'll check in with you some others from time to time....-wink-...love you Michael
reply by MizKat on 13-Jan-2015
    It would be very nice if you checked in with me now and again.

    Love you too, son
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Scream it on eagle wings - Son Shine - love both of those. Wonderful poem of faith Michael. Keep spreading the good word!
Teresa

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
    hi Teresa....-smile- ah I'm the worst of the lot...but IAM...grateful....thank you...Big love Michael