Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Chapter Once; Part Cuatro"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
42 total reviews
Comment from elgone
Playing catch up on your story. I've been working on revisions and submitting them one at a time. My publisher and I signed a contract for the entire series of The Wolfcat Chronicles. So I'll be busy working with the editors soon enough. Your story is getting more exciting, now.
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
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Playing catch up on your story. I've been working on revisions and submitting them one at a time. My publisher and I signed a contract for the entire series of The Wolfcat Chronicles. So I'll be busy working with the editors soon enough. Your story is getting more exciting, now.
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
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Thank you for reading. Good luck I am cheering for you.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I do so enjoy this gal and her horse...and her chutzpah. I have been away and need to catch up...but, i am glad I read this.
You tell a good yarn.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Hi. I do so enjoy this gal and her horse...and her chutzpah. I have been away and need to catch up...but, i am glad I read this.
You tell a good yarn.
padumachitta
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I have missed you. I hope you're back for a while..
Comment from rtobaygo
Hello
The fight scene was intense and quick as they often are. The reluctant camaraderie between Soni and Jim was well played.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Out of 6's
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Hello
The fight scene was intense and quick as they often are. The reluctant camaraderie between Soni and Jim was well played.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Out of 6's
Comment Written 14-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Comment from dmt1967
This is a good story. Just one thing ' and tied him( to brush)' I thin you meant (to a bush) otherwise it looks like the person carries a horses brush on a shoot with them. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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This is a good story. Just one thing ' and tied him( to brush)' I thin you meant (to a bush) otherwise it looks like the person carries a horses brush on a shoot with them. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I thought I fixed that. Better check again.
Comment from donaldww
I thought we were going to eat while we discussed(discuss) a plan."
The action is superb, and I like Soni's continued low-key ribbing of Jim.
Excellent chapter!
Cheers, DW
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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I thought we were going to eat while we discussed(discuss) a plan."
The action is superb, and I like Soni's continued low-key ribbing of Jim.
Excellent chapter!
Cheers, DW
Comment Written 13-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Comment from Tellis
"I stopped to eat lunch," snapped Soni. "You just can't stay out of trouble, can you?
She's a fiesty one isn't she? I enjoyed reading this well written chapter and I also enjoyed the image of the dog holding the other man on the ground with out actually biting him.
Tellis
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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"I stopped to eat lunch," snapped Soni. "You just can't stay out of trouble, can you?
She's a fiesty one isn't she? I enjoyed reading this well written chapter and I also enjoyed the image of the dog holding the other man on the ground with out actually biting him.
Tellis
Comment Written 13-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A great chapter which certainly shows how differently the two of them think. She wants the horse and he the dinner. I wonder how you sneak away with an extra horse. Maybe we'll find out next week Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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A great chapter which certainly shows how differently the two of them think. She wants the horse and he the dinner. I wonder how you sneak away with an extra horse. Maybe we'll find out next week Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Comment from angelface2
Wow, Barbara, this is another great chapter. It's always interesting and exciting. I'm glad she got Midnight back, but wonder who it was doing the chuckling. A friend or foe? Well, I guess I'll have to wait and see. Nice writing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Wow, Barbara, this is another great chapter. It's always interesting and exciting. I'm glad she got Midnight back, but wonder who it was doing the chuckling. A friend or foe? Well, I guess I'll have to wait and see. Nice writing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Comment from Writingfundimension
Lots of good action as well as dialogue in this chapter, Barbara. Soni and Jim make a good team, of course having Kuruk in the background also increases the odds. Great chapter.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Lots of good action as well as dialogue in this chapter, Barbara. Soni and Jim make a good team, of course having Kuruk in the background also increases the odds. Great chapter.
:) Bev
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Comment from S.M.E.Schultz
Good dialogue. In her statement: " That was Grandfather's doings...", is "doings" plural for a reason? It just sounds a little odd because your verb is singular, but it might be dialectic. I have the same question about her description of Grandfather;s throwing skill: if she is speaking grammatically correctly, then the word should be "accurately". Sorry, it's the old English teacher in me coming out again!The action is still moving forward, though, and it's exciting stuff.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Good dialogue. In her statement: " That was Grandfather's doings...", is "doings" plural for a reason? It just sounds a little odd because your verb is singular, but it might be dialectic. I have the same question about her description of Grandfather;s throwing skill: if she is speaking grammatically correctly, then the word should be "accurately". Sorry, it's the old English teacher in me coming out again!The action is still moving forward, though, and it's exciting stuff.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. LOL Us Texans don't always use great grammar in our dialogues.
