The Wonder
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Comment from jlsavell
Truly extraordinaire! Your ending superb and could be adopted as a great philosophical quote. This is incredibly beautiful, no more than beautiful... moving, stunning, emotionally charged.. I know what she means to you. This is worthy of more than a six... much love
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Truly extraordinaire! Your ending superb and could be adopted as a great philosophical quote. This is incredibly beautiful, no more than beautiful... moving, stunning, emotionally charged.. I know what she means to you. This is worthy of more than a six... much love
Comment Written 17-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Hi Jimi...-smile- thank you...she is my friend, and I am fortunate for it. Sure hope she comes home soon...alright love you Michael
Comment from michaelcahill
This is really beautiful. I didn't know she was ill. This year is starting off rough. Sorry to be late to this, prayers are underway. She's a sweet woman. Lovely piece, especially touched by the ending. mike
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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This is really beautiful. I didn't know she was ill. This year is starting off rough. Sorry to be late to this, prayers are underway. She's a sweet woman. Lovely piece, especially touched by the ending. mike
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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thanks Mike...-smile- she needs them...appreciate you brother...bug love michael
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Pili is going through a lot at the moment, Michael and your poem is so caring and loving. But that is you, you have a heart as big as the planet earth. I am sure Pili read this with love in her heart back to you. Always will love you, my dear friend. xxxx
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
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Pili is going through a lot at the moment, Michael and your poem is so caring and loving. But that is you, you have a heart as big as the planet earth. I am sure Pili read this with love in her heart back to you. Always will love you, my dear friend. xxxx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
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Hi Sandy...-smile- yes, her and Art both...He loves her so much he shares it...doesn't try to possess it. that's real love...-smile-..I sure pray something really good happens to them...you too...-smile- love Michael
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Have you had any more news? What with Pili and Maureen, the year isn't starting off very well.
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very worried about both...haven't heard from Maureen...in a long time, hasn't posted a single poem. I left a pm...she hasn't answered. Pili...is still hospitalized. Art sent an e-mail...said she still the same. so...and now their looking Fri. day as a possible release...so will see....-smile- yea, just swell....big hug-
Comment from closetpoetjester
Such a eloquent, tender and profound write Michael and I felt the outpouring of love this was written with. I hope dear Pili hangs in there as I'm sure every one here including myself is saying a little prayer just for her. Stay strong Lawnmower man.
Sassy
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PS Favourite lines...the question she asks at the end and the answer you give. Too clever.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Such a eloquent, tender and profound write Michael and I felt the outpouring of love this was written with. I hope dear Pili hangs in there as I'm sure every one here including myself is saying a little prayer just for her. Stay strong Lawnmower man.
Sassy
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PS Favourite lines...the question she asks at the end and the answer you give. Too clever.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Hi Sassy....good to see you. -smile-...thank you...yes I do love her...honestly...lovely. She is a great Lady...wonderful friend...and wife to a great guy who stands by her...strong. thank you saying a prayer...do me a favor will ya...stop by her sight and say hi...she would like that I think...bug love Michael
Comment from ravenblack
A six in support of the beauty of your poem and the support of Pili. Please, if you speak to her, tell her that I am thinking of her. Sometimes, the best poems spring from a few lines of conversation. Your paradise of no regrets and all at play springs from your last four lines.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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A six in support of the beauty of your poem and the support of Pili. Please, if you speak to her, tell her that I am thinking of her. Sometimes, the best poems spring from a few lines of conversation. Your paradise of no regrets and all at play springs from your last four lines.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Hi Ed...-smile- ...appreciate this man...yea shes a great Lady....been dealing with some stuff for a long time now. sometimes we sit together in the garden....bless you Brother ...Michael
Comment from tw4fun
Great title-- Your poetry is deep and thought-provokng. I like the way you ask" How many days add up to a lifetime etc." the imagery and metaphors work well. This type of writing is not easy, but you seem to have mastered the technique.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Great title-- Your poetry is deep and thought-provokng. I like the way you ask" How many days add up to a lifetime etc." the imagery and metaphors work well. This type of writing is not easy, but you seem to have mastered the technique.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Thank you man...-smile-...but I'm master of nothing...just a wanderer, sojourning soul exposed...big love michael
Comment from mshirachot
Absolutely will lift up a prayer for your friend, Pili. What is up with her if you don't mind me asking?
Lovely poem. Nice use of alliteration with sudden sodden and many other places throughout.
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings to you,
Marsha
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Absolutely will lift up a prayer for your friend, Pili. What is up with her if you don't mind me asking?
Lovely poem. Nice use of alliteration with sudden sodden and many other places throughout.
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings to you,
Marsha
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Hi Marsha...-smile- she's been hospitalized, something to do with her broncular tubes...I think. she's having trouble breathing. I spoke to her for a couple minutes today...she assures me she's coming home. Her husband Art and her just buried his Mother...he loves her so much. Anyway....thank you Marsha....Michael
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Thanks for the details. Awww...so sad to lose a mamma, how well I know. May Pili be healed and made perfectly whole in the mighty name of Jesus!
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, this is just beautiful...I know Pili will love it...I know you and her are very dear friends...she will be ok...you will see...I pray for her and others every night...very beautifully written...and I love the song...a beautiful picture...God watch over her...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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HI Michael, this is just beautiful...I know Pili will love it...I know you and her are very dear friends...she will be ok...you will see...I pray for her and others every night...very beautifully written...and I love the song...a beautiful picture...God watch over her...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Hi Linda....-smile- ahh always she is my friend...but she has many here...like you...-smile- I'm sorry if I ever hurt you Linda...I really don't mean to hurt anyone....love you Michael
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I know you don't Michael...I know you...I'm sorry as well...love you too!! Linda
Comment from adewpearl
the garden's handmaiden - add apostrophe for possessive
good consonance of G sounds throughout
vivid descriptive detail with appeal to various senses
good alliteration in phrases like beast of burden and behold beauty and finds you friend
soulful expression of heartfelt emotion
Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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the garden's handmaiden - add apostrophe for possessive
good consonance of G sounds throughout
vivid descriptive detail with appeal to various senses
good alliteration in phrases like beast of burden and behold beauty and finds you friend
soulful expression of heartfelt emotion
Brooke
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Hi Brooke...-smile- thank you very much...glad you liked it...big love Michael
