Comment from JanetRussek

Exceptional

Oh oh, what next? Your brain must work 24-7. It amazes me how you come up with the fantastic twists that you do. Sure wish I had your imagination and then be able to put it into words.
Warm Regards,
Janet

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Are you sure you're not my mother reincarnated. She always had an inflated opinion on her children's abilities.

Thank you again, Janet. Your compliments mean so much to me.

Comment from kateabb

Good

This seems like an intriguing story but I think I am picking up in the middle of it so I do not have the benefit of understanding the story line.

It is not entirely clear who Jess is. Is he the air traffic controller?

The relationship between Kate and Meredith is not obvious. The piece could do with a little more explanation.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thanks Kate for reading and reviewing. It's always nice to hear from someone you've not met before. Hope 2015 is kind to you

Comment from alf collier

Excellent

Hi Bob. This chapter builds the tension slowly and well. The dialogue is credible and the words flow to tell the story. Thanks for sharing, alf

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you alf. From your profile I see you're a lady. How does a lady get to be called alf.

Thank you for reviewing my work and then being so kind with the stars. Hope you have a great 2015

reply by alf collier on 12-Jan-2015

Hi Bob, was a childhood nickname, ALF being my initials.

Comment from Kausar_Javeria

Excellent

Hello there~!
Ah! Another really good chapter. This story is really well-written; and it gives of a 'real' feel.
Well done!

JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)

(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Whenever I see your name I struggle to believe you're so young. I've read some of your work and you are an amazing talent. I am envious.

I hope 2015 sees all your dreams come true

reply by Kausar_Javeria on 13-Jan-2015

I'm honoured by your compliment. Thanks you very very much.
I hope your year would be the best yet too!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well what has happened to Meredith, is she dead, whatever became of nobody seems to know, Arthur and Tyler have hijacked a helicopter and when asked for identification are saying they've got somebody with a broken leg from a farm. Clever Jess, looking for Paslow, discover he's passed way, sorry I must have missed an interim episode, I'll pick it up again! Well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thanks Roy. Hope everything in Adelaide is going well. Gee you have some warm days over there. All the best for 2015