Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "A Walk In the Fog"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
16 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
A great end to a great story. At least in this lifetime Valerius and Julia managed to get married. Mikey, this is a great story and you kept my attention through out. Well done.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
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A great end to a great story. At least in this lifetime Valerius and Julia managed to get married. Mikey, this is a great story and you kept my attention through out. Well done.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Michael: Well done with the weddings and the mystery. Yes, I like the ending with all gathered to celebrate in joy. Would this be book two since you had these characters in the military war before this one? I like how the children still see Valerius and Julia kissing. Love conquers all...yes...God's way!
flylikeaneagle
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Michael: Well done with the weddings and the mystery. Yes, I like the ending with all gathered to celebrate in joy. Would this be book two since you had these characters in the military war before this one? I like how the children still see Valerius and Julia kissing. Love conquers all...yes...God's way!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from emrpoems
I think you have a very creative mind and if you decided on venturing on the relationship in heaven it would prove to be no challenge for you. This last chapter was. Thank you for sharing your final chapter with us and it is only fitting that as the end of a great book I give it a six. Thoroughly enjoyed reading many of the chapters
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I think you have a very creative mind and if you decided on venturing on the relationship in heaven it would prove to be no challenge for you. This last chapter was. Thank you for sharing your final chapter with us and it is only fitting that as the end of a great book I give it a six. Thoroughly enjoyed reading many of the chapters
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from gypsycaravan
Love is seen with the heart, not with the eyes. I love this line and believe it, wholeheartedly. You never need to respond to any of my reviews, mikey. I would rather you keep writing. As to the continuing books of these two, I welcome them. Maybe the lives they spend apart showing their search for something and not knowing what or who they search for? You probably will come up with more great episodes. Terrific book.
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Love is seen with the heart, not with the eyes. I love this line and believe it, wholeheartedly. You never need to respond to any of my reviews, mikey. I would rather you keep writing. As to the continuing books of these two, I welcome them. Maybe the lives they spend apart showing their search for something and not knowing what or who they search for? You probably will come up with more great episodes. Terrific book.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from jessyjamespoems
I enjoyed this part of the story- it got my interest up to read the parts I've missed! This part followed hand in hand didn't jump around and for me to want to read the rest is good! Very well written it kept my attention and that deserves the 5stars it's self!
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I enjoyed this part of the story- it got my interest up to read the parts I've missed! This part followed hand in hand didn't jump around and for me to want to read the rest is good! Very well written it kept my attention and that deserves the 5stars it's self!
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from Sankey
Good on ya mate it has been a wonderful ride. Waiting in anticipation of where each chapter was going. Even saw some spiritual messages in there as well. Glad truth triump0hed over all. By the way I kn9ow you and several other have been wanting me to day more about our travels. Well Louise has given me permission to 'Ghost write" our holiday stories on Fan Story if Tom agrees as Luise does not want to join FS. She is a very girl. She will not look for corrections and suggestions for improvement it is just so you all can see more about our country and our trips. It is already being proof read by me and written as things actually happened. I hope Tom agrees for me to do it this way.
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Good on ya mate it has been a wonderful ride. Waiting in anticipation of where each chapter was going. Even saw some spiritual messages in there as well. Glad truth triump0hed over all. By the way I kn9ow you and several other have been wanting me to day more about our travels. Well Louise has given me permission to 'Ghost write" our holiday stories on Fan Story if Tom agrees as Luise does not want to join FS. She is a very girl. She will not look for corrections and suggestions for improvement it is just so you all can see more about our country and our trips. It is already being proof read by me and written as things actually happened. I hope Tom agrees for me to do it this way.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
