Jesus is Judge
He knows the truth.22 total reviews
Comment from pattipac
Considering the tragedy that occurred in France last week, your poem of "not judging our neighbor" is a timely one. God's Word tells us that He alone will be mankind's judge.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Considering the tragedy that occurred in France last week, your poem of "not judging our neighbor" is a timely one. God's Word tells us that He alone will be mankind's judge.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you again, Patricia, for another lovely review. I'm just sorry you didn't get any member cents for your time. It was really kind of you to review it. :) xsx sandra
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I missed this one. Verrrry good ABC entry. I love the alliteration in each line... nice bonus! Never saw that done before. And the message is powerful and clear. Best of luck! :)
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I missed this one. Verrrry good ABC entry. I love the alliteration in each line... nice bonus! Never saw that done before. And the message is powerful and clear. Best of luck! :)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you, my friend, I had fun doing this one, trying to make it come together and make sense. Thanks for the good luck wishes!! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Aussie
Best wishes for your contest entry; such a mixed up world. We worship and they worship the devil. There is only one god and vengeance is His. Still, we need not worry, because He will repay. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Best wishes for your contest entry; such a mixed up world. We worship and they worship the devil. There is only one god and vengeance is His. Still, we need not worry, because He will repay. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Kay. It won't win, I have seen many better ones than this one, but it nice having a go. :) xsx Sandra
Comment from Treischel
You really carried the ABC formatted poem to the extreme in this one by using nearly complete alliteration on every line. A lovely spiritual message too. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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You really carried the ABC formatted poem to the extreme in this one by using nearly complete alliteration on every line. A lovely spiritual message too. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Tom, perhaps I overdid it? There are some much better ABC entries, but it was nice to give it a go. Thank you for the good luck wishes, my friend. xsx sandra
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Not at all. This format is not my favorite, because how hard is it to do? But you made it a challenge and still followed the format and gave a message. That is commendable.
Comment from mauial
I love the way you used alliteration effectively throughout this abc poem. This is profound: Terrorists' truth--is their own termination. It goes beyond that too, as many besides terrorists think their truth is the same as God's and yet its not.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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I love the way you used alliteration effectively throughout this abc poem. This is profound: Terrorists' truth--is their own termination. It goes beyond that too, as many besides terrorists think their truth is the same as God's and yet its not.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Yes, you are right. But they will all have to face the highest judge in the universe one day. Thank you so much for your lovely review, Mauial! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from rama devi
How creative to make the ABC alliterated too on each line. Such a device can prove over-dramatic but you have done it with finesse. The first line feels slightly overdone, though...but many readers will like the cleverness of it.
Like this line:
Hope in heaven's highest hallway
Should Heaven be capped, I think?
Clever:
In the instance of indignation
Jesus is judge for the duration
Potent closing message and timely and relevant too:
Terrorists' truth--is their own termination
Good job. An unusual poetic style from your pen, dear.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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How creative to make the ABC alliterated too on each line. Such a device can prove over-dramatic but you have done it with finesse. The first line feels slightly overdone, though...but many readers will like the cleverness of it.
Like this line:
Hope in heaven's highest hallway
Should Heaven be capped, I think?
Clever:
In the instance of indignation
Jesus is judge for the duration
Potent closing message and timely and relevant too:
Terrorists' truth--is their own termination
Good job. An unusual poetic style from your pen, dear.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Hi Rama, happy New Year, my friend. I never know if Heaven should or shouldn't be capped, I have just changed it now though. Thinking of it, yes, it should, it is a place, isn't it. Thank you so much for your lovely review, Rama, yes, it is very unusual for me, mine normally go on a bit! LOL. xsx Sandra.
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Hi dear Sandra...Thanks for you lovely and gracious response. Indeed, Heaven, if used as a proper noun (a place), should be capped. Love, rd
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your letters work well to allow the reader to see and feel that Jesus is the final judge in life but terrorists make the own judgement
good visual
good alliteration
good rhyme
good use "S" "L" "M" "R" "T" consonance
good use "E" "O" "I" assonance
flows easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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good luck in the contest
your letters work well to allow the reader to see and feel that Jesus is the final judge in life but terrorists make the own judgement
good visual
good alliteration
good rhyme
good use "S" "L" "M" "R" "T" consonance
good use "E" "O" "I" assonance
flows easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Faye! :) xsx Sandra
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most welcome Sandra
have a blessed day...SC <> Faye (*:*)
Comment from patcelaw
Jesus our judge in goodness and grace we shall greet in glory, the glory of heaven where the truth of God existsa, not the faux truth of the terrorists. Patricia
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Jesus our judge in goodness and grace we shall greet in glory, the glory of heaven where the truth of God existsa, not the faux truth of the terrorists. Patricia
Comment Written 10-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Patricia! :) xsx Sandra
Comment from MelB
I like that not only did you follow the ABC, but you made each line full of G's, H's etc. very creative! Terrorists truth is their own termination - powerful line! Jesus sure is the judge and I would hate to be them standing before Him!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015
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I like that not only did you follow the ABC, but you made each line full of G's, H's etc. very creative! Terrorists truth is their own termination - powerful line! Jesus sure is the judge and I would hate to be them standing before Him!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Melb, for your wonderful review! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from Nosha17
Lest they be under any disillusion truth will win out and the terrorists will have their just reward. Good clear message and well chosen words. Good luck in the contest, Sandra. Faye
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015
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Lest they be under any disillusion truth will win out and the terrorists will have their just reward. Good clear message and well chosen words. Good luck in the contest, Sandra. Faye
Comment Written 10-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015
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Thank you, Faye, for a great review, and for the good luck wishes. xsx sandra :)
