Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

Whoa. This is story keeps getting curiouser and curiouser. (Just a word I made up). Who and what is the Director? Well, it keeps the mind spinning and the reader interested. You have a superb imagination. All of sixes, but this is excellent writing.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015

Sorry about the delay in replying. I've had to work the last four days.

Thanks again for another most encouraging review

Comment from JanetRussek

Excellent

Bob! Never a dull minute; it just keeps getting better and better. Where is Meredith and what's she up to? This story had better get published. Better still, it should be a movie. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Warm Regards,
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015

Your reviews are so encouraging. Sorry about the delay in replying, I've had to work these past four days.

I'd prefer publishing, but a movie wouldn't be a bad second prize

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You convey Tyler's troubled and confused state of mind effectively.
Good use of dialogue to depict a state of urgency and suspense
good use of realistic-sounding dialogue
With no answer coming, she accessed - add comma
I'd bet her father' dead - father's
lacking in hard evidence, but it carries - add comma
Brooke

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015

Thanks Brooke, I've made the changes you nominated. I thank you so much for pointing them out. This is what I love about fanstory, there are so many helpful editors out there

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Bob, this is an interesting take on the thief we call Alzheimer's. My mother died from it. I found the conversation believable and the irony of the last line grab me with a little shock and resolution. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015

Thank you Gracie Ann. It's always nice to see new name crop up among the reviewers. I hope 2015 is kind to you