Turn The Page
One day this world will end, and a new chapter will begin...84 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Splendid Dean! This is a far cry from what you normally do
and your Pastor Pride was absolutely right! I think it is absolutely your best work! My third six gone on a Sunday!
NOOOOO! Well done! Nancy
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Splendid Dean! This is a far cry from what you normally do
and your Pastor Pride was absolutely right! I think it is absolutely your best work! My third six gone on a Sunday!
NOOOOO! Well done! Nancy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from giraffmang
A nice departure from the norm, Dean.
Your pastor is a canny man.
Well structured and well written as usual.
I know little about 'the rapture' myself. In Belfast it was more how the other side (Catholic or Protestantism) were the spawn of Satan. And that was as a pre-teen1
All the best
Gareth
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A nice departure from the norm, Dean.
Your pastor is a canny man.
Well structured and well written as usual.
I know little about 'the rapture' myself. In Belfast it was more how the other side (Catholic or Protestantism) were the spawn of Satan. And that was as a pre-teen1
All the best
Gareth
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I would love to meet your pastor. I am sure you two have some very interesting conversations. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem as I do all of your work. I always know if your name is attached it will be a good read.
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I would love to meet your pastor. I am sure you two have some very interesting conversations. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem as I do all of your work. I always know if your name is attached it will be a good read.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I like your Pastor as he is absolutely right given that the spiritual and occult are two sides of the same coin. This is masterfully crafted and an amazingly elevating read. The Rapture is one of those bits of tradition I do not exactly agree with, but it does make for some fine writing as a theme. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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I like your Pastor as he is absolutely right given that the spiritual and occult are two sides of the same coin. This is masterfully crafted and an amazingly elevating read. The Rapture is one of those bits of tradition I do not exactly agree with, but it does make for some fine writing as a theme. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
