Framed
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "A New Team Is Formed"A thriller set in Washington
5 total reviews
Comment from royowen
It looks like Tyler and Arthur have snook out of the danger zone for now, as in the movies, these blokes seem almost indestructible, they disposed of the dangerous pilot, who could have caused their deaths, and have temporarily found refuge, absorbing read, Bob, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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It looks like Tyler and Arthur have snook out of the danger zone for now, as in the movies, these blokes seem almost indestructible, they disposed of the dangerous pilot, who could have caused their deaths, and have temporarily found refuge, absorbing read, Bob, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Long way to go yet, but they do seem lucky. A bit like a batsman who keeps getting dropped.
Thanks again Roy. Hope the New Year brings you every success
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You're right about that
Comment from jlsavell
Okay, now I do believe I am reading chapter 29 of this book. The new format makes it hard to clarify. However, this does not deter from the fact that this chapter is so well written that it can virtually stand on its own without a synopsis or a catch up paraphrase.
Your review of my work, prompted me to look into yours. I am not giving you a six because you gave me one, though so appreciated.. but because it is deserved of much recognition.
Exceptional dialogue and though your characters are probably well developed in previous chapters, one can get a grasp of their true personality. Great tension and suspense.
Beautiful work, makes me want to go back to the beginning.. ... jlsavell
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Okay, now I do believe I am reading chapter 29 of this book. The new format makes it hard to clarify. However, this does not deter from the fact that this chapter is so well written that it can virtually stand on its own without a synopsis or a catch up paraphrase.
Your review of my work, prompted me to look into yours. I am not giving you a six because you gave me one, though so appreciated.. but because it is deserved of much recognition.
Exceptional dialogue and though your characters are probably well developed in previous chapters, one can get a grasp of their true personality. Great tension and suspense.
Beautiful work, makes me want to go back to the beginning.. ... jlsavell
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you for such kind praise. Comments like this serve two purposes, firstly it blows the ego and secondly it encourages one to continue writing.
I wish you all the best for 2015. May we both find a publisher
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Tyler is a bad ass. That comes through clear. Very enjoyable. I could picture this in my head as if I was watching a movie. A fun and enjoyable read. I especially liked watching the fat guys run away. A fun and enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Tyler is a bad ass. That comes through clear. Very enjoyable. I could picture this in my head as if I was watching a movie. A fun and enjoyable read. I especially liked watching the fat guys run away. A fun and enjoyable read.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you Michael for stopping by and reviewing my work. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from JanetRussek
Love to know how that fascinating brain of yours works. This chapter has me on edge. Really on edge. Love it! Always delighted when your posts pop up.
Warm Regards,
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Love to know how that fascinating brain of yours works. This chapter has me on edge. Really on edge. Love it! Always delighted when your posts pop up.
Warm Regards,
Janet
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Whenever I need my ego boosted I reread one of your reviews. You really are too generous with your comments. Hope 2015 is a good year for you and may we both find success in our writing
Comment from emrpoems
Excellent use of dialogue and interaction between the characters. The story continues to develop and engage the reader to keep him reading . Look forward to the next chapter
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Excellent use of dialogue and interaction between the characters. The story continues to develop and engage the reader to keep him reading . Look forward to the next chapter
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you for your kind words, I do appreciate them. Hope 2015 brings you every success you hope for
